I Miss You......

22nd Sept 2008 -  the day i will never forget .
U parted with me and broke the friendship forever....
U will never know how i felt that day- 
my world ended,nothing else i could say.
it was easy for you to part ways
but how could i ? in my little world you are like sun's rays......
spreading joy n happiness in my lyf,
i alwayz thought how can God make a friend like you ?
full of spirit, fun-loving , caring n true...
who can hold his tears n still make me smile
holding my hands n walk miles 
not knowing the destination nor the place
but with the intention of bringing the smile back on my face 
everytime u called me sweetheart
you are the best friend in the world, i thought,
those pranks n jokes when i was down,
the way u teased me when i frowned;
it was always fun whenever u talked,
those long night chats , how can i forgot?
those silly jokes when i was sad
calling me an alien will make you glad
those bday surprises n proposals midnight...
remember those discussions n silly fight?
life was all fun when you were their
i had a reason 2 live again - for the way you cared 
never in my dreams i thought you willl leave me alone,
still cant forget those last words on phone....
bt now you split , winter has come in my life again,
never will i get back those moments spent with you, 
for the time we spent together was very few;
how i wish those time to return back-
you calling me again - stupid , duffer , ***** n crack
i still dont believe i am no more in ur life again.....
sometimes i think did you play a game ?
but i know you so well with the few time we spent together,
what made you take that decision i know dear.
still my heart wishes for your company,
you know that i luv u honey.....
why cant those sweet moments come again?
why cant we be friends again?
words can never define the feelng i have for you
i can just put it as 'i miss you' 
hey dear i will wait for the time till we meet again
n you say me 'oh dear! i luv you' once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/4/2009 7:17:00 AM
Beautful. this implants your heartach right into my soul. i know this feeling, in the shadows of my mind. my greatest fear, loosng my boo. if i were to ever loose my best friend noel like this...i dont know what id do. this brings that fear to the surface. beautiful. The Lost Poet
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Date: 4/27/2009 8:26:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/24/2009 7:31:00 AM
Beautiful and touching, but, you will have more sunny days and find that special someone.
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:33:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:42:00 AM
God has a better plan for you. At least that's what I think. Your poem is full of emotion and heartache. I am sorry for your suffering. God Bless you. Keep writing and welcome to poetry soup. Love, Dane
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