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I Miss the Stars

I miss the stars, I miss how they shined, So bright up in the sky, I miss the stars, And how things used to be, I miss the stars, And their effect over me. -PF

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/19/2016 6:12:00 AM

Hi. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Thatgirlfrommars Pf
Date: 5/19/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thanks!

Abdiel Rios

Date: 5/18/2016 9:29:00 AM

I love stars too I feel like they are not getting brighter

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:04:00 AM

That Girl, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Lin Lane

Date: 4/28/2016 8:57:00 AM

The stars are still there. Once your eyes are reopened you'll see them. Nice write, PF

Moon Flower

Date: 4/28/2016 8:52:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Thatgirl. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2016 6:29:00 AM

Nice, one girl from mars... fa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@