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For "I Miss" Poetry contest /July 2024/ Ink Empress sponsor

I Miss My Youth

Ode to Youth



There was a time when I was new,
Sprouts fresh and green, life just begun;
My skin plump as morning petals dew,
All things are beautiful when young!
An energy and strength ever true;
Discoveries, emotions so exciting!
Yes, it was so…
Not that long ago…
My future ahead inviting. 

The early days, the world yet unknown;
Hopes and dreams like sunbeams shone. 
Possibilities had no end, 
Tension held like the arrow on a bow, 
Those days before heartbreaks begin;
Cupid, quivering, not ready to let go. 
Regrets hadn't yet brought me to my knees.
Yes, youth is the state, where love awaits, 
before the winters freeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go..Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Back with congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again.  Have a fun day............
Empress Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Dear crystol, all things are beautiful when young, very well written about how much you miss your youth and being all that youv described especially in your opening lines. The cadence of this poem really stood out for me! It has a lyrical tune amidst the nostalgia youv depicted in here. I also love the line “ Hopes and dreams like sunbeams shone. ” beautiful. Lucky are the ones that can close their eyes and see good things about their youth to miss. Congratulations on your win
Woods Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:10 PM
And thank you for the wonderful contest... it was a great one!
Woods Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 12:07 PM
Thank you so much for your detailed review! I appreciate that! Yes I do feel blessed to have had a good childhood, I know some did and do not and it breaks my heart. Ty again! Xo
Parker Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:57 PM
A time we have all lived and can relate to...good luck poet
Woods Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Tysm! Xo
Parker Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Terrific, poignant closing lines... :o))
Woods Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Oh so glad you think so! Xo
Roper Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 11:09 PM
Great thoughts of youth; yes, life and experience were fresh.
Woods Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Tysm Eve! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:38 PM
Omg. This is the title I will be going with. But completely different style. Just gotta put it together. Truly I miss youth more than a thing s Else.wonderful.
Woods Avatar
July 23, 2024 at 8:12 AM
I'm excited to see what you write! Thank you for stopping by! Xo
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 9:38 PM
Any other thing.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 10:32 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.....................
Woods Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 5:20 PM
Ooo! I'll come check it out now...ty Paula, xo
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