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I Miss It

The summer sun has gone into hiding

leaving us with these cloud covered skies.

The west bound breeze is cold and damp.

Happy moods are dampened too.

Clouds equal depression

as sun equals joy.

Gone just one day,

I miss it.

Come back

sun.

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Juanita Warden

Date: 7/11/2011 12:12:00 PM

Sunny and Hot here..Wish i could send you a little of it..Good writing..enjoyed

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/9/2011 8:45:00 PM

so true....we have had a drought and we got some blessed rain today....yeah!!

James Fraser

Date: 7/9/2011 5:14:00 AM

The sun sure lifts people Francine, and many a person dives into the abyss of gloom when it goes. Fine Etheree, have a lovely weekend :)

Don Johnson

Date: 7/8/2011 4:02:00 PM

i could use a bit of sun, i'm here on me computer, cold as charity for one, hot cuddle would suit me, hon. love, Don going out to the sun:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 8:47:00 AM

Francine, some days I think you and I must be so much alike. I almost worship the sun, it gives me such a high. And the past few days have been heartless to me. Love this poem. Great etheree. BTW, thanks for the congrats. I saw I had a win in my member area, but had no way to figure out for WHAT until I saw it was for my haiku in Brian's contest. gosh, i wish his contests appeared on front page so we could all follow them better. For sure I will check out THESE winners.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2011 12:58:00 PM

will send u some Sun from this beach Francine as it is 102 degrees but am loving it so much.. we need some clouds and rain to balance out our dryness .. understand your missing something beautiful as the Sun in your lines in this wonderful form luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/7/2011 12:22:00 PM

I'm sure the Sun is back by now, Francine. Hope so anyway. Enjoyed. luv Ralph

Jack Horne

Date: 7/7/2011 10:54:00 AM

Hope you get plenty more sunshine, Francine. I prefer rain! Lovely write : )

Cory Long

Date: 7/7/2011 10:40:00 AM

thats how the weather was yesterday nicely penned. cory

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 10:39:00 AM

What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry Francine I love this one it goes to my favorites. Love, Carol