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I Met a Soldier In a Bar

Turning, at the last second. I catch the briefest flicker of your smile through the crowd. Like lighting - on this cloudy and wind-swept afternoon - it thrills me to my soul. I wonder. I wander through my lust. I picture your body, naked and pure. I long to touch it, to taste it, to find pleasure in it’s perfection. To find reprieve in your arms. A dangerous and delicious endeavor. Swiftly, I pull myself from this longing. You are moving toward me. A generous glittering in your eyes making my hope a true and tangible thing. A wink, a nod and I know that you are mine. I move toward the door and you are at my side. © 2007 Raymond J Wright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2010 4:48:00 PM
smooth pick up--too easy!! never worked for me that way.
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:45:00 PM
Um a moment in time it sounds great! Laura :)
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