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I Mended Him

(28/10/2012) These whole times I've spent my life assembling fractured pieces Gluing them with my tears And mending them in my caress For a man that used to be fragile and scared I’ve brought him life and honest deed Now he’s strong like he’s never been scattered He forgot who he was and leaves me strayed I can still hear his fears and weep What a heart he has After he’s fixed He discards me ripped I mended him With tears I glue my fractions and will win Dinda Minardi For 'Picking Up the Broken Pieces' by Gail Angel Doyle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/16/2013 11:34:00 AM
Well deserved praise for your winning entry. Beyond that I send true appreciation for masterful talent.... You are terrific!.... Jake
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Date: 11/12/2012 1:14:00 AM
Wonderfully written Dinda! I love the build up to the story and the optimistic resolution at the end. Nice!
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Date: 11/10/2012 7:11:00 AM
I love this poem, I am afraid to cry for fear my eyes will be glued shut and I won't be able to read your next poem. Great job
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Date: 11/1/2012 10:22:00 AM
very profound poem, love hoiw you ended this wonderful poem....
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Picking Up The Broken Pieces" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations. Seren
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Date: 10/29/2012 11:19:00 PM
CONGRATS DINDA ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN LUV .. SO TOUCHING .. HOPE U R DOING WELL ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:50:00 PM
Dinda, Congratulations on your win,,, always~pd
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:24:00 PM
That is a sad tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Broken Pieces" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2012 11:57:00 PM
deeply scribed and a wonder of a piece, dinda... much pleased!..) huggs
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Date: 10/28/2012 1:57:00 PM
A touching poem from you Dinda.Very Emotional write.Enjoyed the read.
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