Dinda Minardi Poet Rhyme

I Mended Him

(28/10/2012)

These whole times 
I've spent my life assembling fractured pieces
Gluing them with my tears
And mending them in my caress

For a man that used to be fragile and scared
I’ve brought him life and honest deed
Now he’s strong like he’s never been scattered
He forgot who he was and leaves me strayed

I can still hear his fears and weep
What a heart he has
After he’s fixed
He discards me ripped

I mended him 

With tears I glue my fractions and will win


Dinda Minardi
For 'Picking Up the Broken Pieces' by Gail 
Angel Doyle

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John Posey March 16, 2013 at 11:34 AM Well deserved praise for your winning entry. Beyond that I send true appreciation for masterful talent.... You are terrific!.... Jake

Vicky Tsiluma November 12, 2012 at 1:14 AM Wonderfully written Dinda! I love the build up to the story and the optimistic resolution at the end. Nice!

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2012 at 7:11 AM I love this poem, I am afraid to cry for fear my eyes will be glued shut and I won't be able to read your next poem. Great job

Harry Horsman November 1, 2012 at 10:22 AM very profound poem, love hoiw you ended this wonderful poem....

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2012 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in "Picking Up The Broken Pieces" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts October 30, 2012 at 2:29 AM Congratulations. Seren

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2012 at 11:19 PM CONGRATS DINDA ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN LUV .. SO TOUCHING .. HOPE U R DOING WELL ..

Poet Destroyer A October 29, 2012 at 8:50 PM Dinda, Congratulations on your win,,, always~pd

Joyce Johnson October 29, 2012 at 5:24 PM That is a sad tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2012 at 4:50 PM Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Broken Pieces" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud October 28, 2012 at 11:57 PM deeply scribed and a wonder of a piece, dinda... much pleased!..) huggs

Kash Poet October 28, 2012 at 1:57 PM A touching poem from you Dinda.Very Emotional write.Enjoyed the read.