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I me my

I me my I watch myself sigh- you leave no room for me my tears comfort each other in exploited agony I me my I see nothing in the sky You don't ever notice me My love for you is a soul bleed I me my If I reach out for the twentieth time would I become closer to your silence or closer to my sigh?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/26/2024 5:11:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/24/2024 9:30:00 AM

Well said Dakota. Have you ever heard the George Harrison song, "I Me Mine"?

Earl Schumacker

Date: 3/23/2024 3:16:00 AM

Hi Dakota, Wow! You have quite a collection of poem here. I was going to use the plural "poems" but you have exactly one item posted. Interesting. You must be new to the site. I wish you all the best. I wish you great success in your creations. Also: Thank you so much for commenting on my story/poem about heads of state and heads of fish, which in my estimation are about one and the same thing. Have a great day. Earl