CayCay Godwin Poet Rondeau

I May Crumble

I may crumble from quiet fear
that somehow showed right now, right here.
I sense stirrings of potent ache.
I cannot bear that we may break.
This nightmarish foe may not near.

How dark formed is in no way clear.
While we embraced, bad vibes appeared.
If we don’t fight for our love’s sake,
I may crumble.

To this sad fate we never steered.
We must deny it any tear.
I’d rather final pills to take.
Coiled in our garden is a snake.
Should we lose all we now hold dear,
I may crumble.

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Casarah Nance July 20, 2016 at 6:48 PM wow, very well done! hugs xx

Viv Wigley July 19, 2016 at 11:46 PM A nice little allegorical write, CayCay, well writ. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2016 at 6:23 AM An passionate piece that works its way into relating it to our own circumstances CaCay. Excellent! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2016 at 10:02 AM wow, Caycay, this is a great rondeau. your title is very strong, very clear and good. WELL DONE, my sweet friend. how are you doing?

Nette Onclaud July 13, 2016 at 5:18 PM what a heartfelt, impressive piece which moved me... my stars say you won't crumble dear cay!..huggs

Jan Allison July 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM such an emotional write Cay cay i love the form with the impact of the repeated phrase:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith July 13, 2016 at 4:34 PM Nice Rondeau CayCay...I fear growing old alone.