I Made a Promise

Lukng @ u ryt now
I made a prmsing vow

I wnt u so much n my lyf
2 myk my drms so bryt

I wil hold u n my arms so tyt
Luv me wid ol of ur heart 2nyt



Translation:

Looking at you right now
I made a promising vow

I want you so much in my life
To make my dreams so bright

I will hold you in my arms so tight
Love me with all of your heart tonight


For David's Contest
6th place Winner

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Date: 10/10/2012 9:28:00 PM
MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND! I AM SO PROUD OF YOU!! LOVE LEONORA. Please join my contest.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:07:00 AM
thanks dear friend Norie..ok I will and I will try my best :)
Date: 10/10/2012 7:48:00 PM
congrats on your win Maria
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:06:00 AM
thanks friend Joseph ;)
Date: 10/10/2012 4:20:00 PM
a cute little romantic one. BIG congrats.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:05:00 AM
thanks friend Andrea, big big congrats to you too for winning 1st place...yahoo!! :)
Date: 10/10/2012 12:45:00 PM
It melts the texting heart!!! Nicely done!!!
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:04:00 AM
thanks friend Carrie :) have a nice day!
Date: 10/10/2012 9:26:00 AM
MARIA, Congratulations, in David's awesome "text talking" contest... always~pd
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:02:00 AM
thank you so much lovable PD :)
Date: 10/10/2012 9:15:00 AM
WAY TO GO MARIA .. CONGRATS ON ANOTHER GREAT WIN LUV ..
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:01:00 AM
thanks friend Linda_Marie, congrats to you too cheers to us!
Date: 10/10/2012 6:13:00 AM
Short BUT SWEET! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:00:00 AM
thanks friend Debbie :)
Date: 10/10/2012 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "TEXT TALK" contest Maria. Love, Carol
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/10/2012 11:59:00 PM
thanks dear carol and thank you so much for placing me in your contest...take care always!
Date: 9/14/2012 7:51:00 PM
what a sweet text message. I wish you well in the contest with it.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/10/2012 7:12:00 AM
thanks friend Andrea :)
Date: 9/9/2012 1:13:00 AM
Oh my!! So romantic and beautiful poem my dear moving me into a dream or fantasy. Congratulations and my BEST WISHES AND LUCK ALWAYS BOTH ON YOUR LOVE LIFE AND MANY BIG WINS!! LUV YAH ALWAYS,
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/9/2012 10:07:00 AM
many thanks to you for your unending support..mwauh!! luv you always!!
Date: 9/8/2012 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful Maria - a romantic - message Have a nice weekend. -xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/8/2012 10:39:00 AM
thanks friend anne Lise...have a blessed weekend too :) hugss!!
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