I Loved You

Can't fight this feeling
So worthless and bleak 
Meaningless and forgotten 
That's how I feel 
In the pits of my guts 
Nothing left to trust 
Relentless motions of guilt 
yet I've done nothing 
Nothing but love you 
try to please you 
Understand what it is you need
But I found myself lost Inside 
emotions that spin webs 
Cold without a hand to touch 
Distant and twisted 
Like everything is my fault 
But I did nothing 
This guilt I hold in me 
Is not mine I plea to you 
To take it back 
The blames you put on top of me
blackness that was poured inside 
You've hidden deep away 
So you can teach me the lack of love 
Winter snow has filled my skin 
Nothing feels left within 
Frozen in pain 
Lost in emotional games 
waiting for you to take back that seed of  hate 
That you planted inside my mind ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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artlyy Avatar
September 18, 2026 at 8:59 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 9:03 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gupta Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Lovely ... Enjoyed very much ...
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