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09/01/23

Would you love me if.......

Third Place

Contest by Silent One.

I Loved You

I Loved You.

       I appreciate your poetic talent absolute, no doubt.
       But  basically I was attracted pursuing
       your thoughts, ideas, outlooks, philosophy of life
       and realisation that resemble so much with those of mine.
       In course of time I got influenced ,
       inspired and whelmed.

         Initial appreciation gradually turned to admiration.
          Going through your poems, it seemed
         that exactly seeds of same poem were sown in my mind
         but couldn't be sprouted owing to lack 
         of my capability to express in proper syllables.
         Those emotions confined in my  mind could not escape !
         But through your poems my imaginations took shape.
   
        Day by day my admiration inflated 
        getting absorbed in your perception
        and my admiration was adorned with lavendar love.
        Poet turned my beloved.
        Serene  pristine dreamy desires of mine
        embower sparkling gems of your poems.
        
         I would still love you, even if you had not been a poet,
        as I  succeeded to hunt immense treasures of your mind
         to make myself embellished.
         I had seen my mirror image in your feelings.
         beyond any earthly dealings.
        So, offering blessings.
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September 13, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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September 1, 2023 at 2:57 AM
- Lovely written, Anisha ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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