I Love You Too Limerick

When years ago I told her, I love you,
I remember seeing green, black, and blue,
In my stomach butterflies,
When I looked into her eyes
I fainted when she said; I love you too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kitchin Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 4:41 PM
Marius, this is so cute, a sweet one, loved the last line, congratulations on your winning placement!
Alexandru Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 2:52 PM
thank you, Tania
Alex Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:56 AM
Great expression. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Alexandru Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 2:53 PM
thank you very much
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 2:15 AM
Adorable ~
Alexandru Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 1:35 PM
thanks, Line
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:24 PM
I think that happens to many a man :) Like it!
Alexandru Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 9:21 AM
I think that too :) Thank you
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