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I Love You So

It took years for you to break this wall I call a heart If I knew you'll be the love of my life I would have been more smart People go through different things but they just don't know You have to hold on to the one you love and never let him go You stold my heart but my pride wouldn't let it show You became my world and I must let you know You got this thing we call love locked like a pro And this is one of the many reasons why I love you so Now we're a force not to be reckoned like Bonnie and Clyde Ike and Tina can take lessons watching the way we ride We took this relationship thing and formed a team Now we're full time lovers if you know what I mean Bonds to strong to be broken Hearts so big their stuck open If you find that true love then There's no more words to be spoken

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/18/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Faleshia..A very nice write! ...hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Faleshia. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:58:00 AM
Great poem of a love so strong- Congrats to you
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Faleshia on your HM in the B.L. contest with these lovely lines so expressive .. enjoy this special honor... happy to hear u returned to work.. I am laid off one month now.. hope all goes well for u and your lovely family.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:06:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Faleshia.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/29/2010 9:11:00 PM
your last two lines so true in every way, and no we cannot deny that. you give great advice, within stories of your own. i look forward to reading more of your heartfelt poetry,i can see a strong woman as i read your poetry, Faleshia.have a wonderful night.(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:57:00 AM
Faleshia- Love is wonderful. May you have happiness forever. SMILES. Reading your poetry today has been a pleasure. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:45:00 AM
Ah nothing like true love! I've had mine for 51 plus years! Well written. Happy St Paddys Day Faleshia.
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:01:00 AM
Faleshia, finding true love is a rare gift. I hope the love you found lasts forever. Moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2010 1:41:00 PM
That's a nice love poem !
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Date: 3/16/2010 11:04:00 AM
That was very profound,,thank you for that ot was quite nice. Blessings,Jackie
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Date: 3/16/2010 9:25:00 AM
This is a fab write Faleshia - If you find true love - Hold on tight - Love the Bonnie and Clyde reference lol - A great share -:)
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