Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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I Love You More Than Chocolate

I love you more than chocolate
Your actions are so sweet
I think you are a super guy and one I’d love to meet
Tall or short, dark or fair it matters not to me
I think you are amazing and other people here agree

I’ve told my hubby all about you
He thinks your poems are really cool
My hubby he’s a diamond  - a very precious jewel
So when you’re on your world tour just take a little time
To meet up for a cup of tea – I think we’d get on fine 

19th November 2015

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Kim Merryman November 20, 2015 at 11:07 PM A cute write, Jan! Love, Kim Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 3:07 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus November 20, 2015 at 3:33 PM Nice tribute to your s(o)uper guy, Jan! It's lovely to have an understanding husband:) Hugs // paul Paul Callus November 20, 2015 at 4:09 PM :) same here :) Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:37 PM There are many souper guys here Paul:-) I am so so lucky to have met you and have you as a special friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Bettridge November 20, 2015 at 3:38 AM Thanks Jan (lol) Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:41 AM Shhh Rob lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2015 at 2:15 AM - He's the best chocolate that exist, and you do not have to share him with anyone ..... all yours !!! - Lovely and sweet, Jan - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:14 AM Thanks Anne Lise - friendships are precious:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso November 20, 2015 at 12:18 AM I have a question, if he ever doesn't show up, is there like a second choice? Do I have a chance at all here? :) Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:14 AM Depends if you bring me an orchid for my collection lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter November 19, 2015 at 9:21 PM Very nice n' sweet Jan! Excellent pen!A 7!In his light God bless you! Wishing you a very lovely day!:) Hugs! D. Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:13 AM Thanks Dorian:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso November 19, 2015 at 7:03 PM Wow I sure love chocolate! especially that kinda chocolate, I think I am jealous too!!!!! Very seductive! Hugs Jan Allison November 20, 2015 at 3:13 AM He is special as I have written of my love of plain chocolate in poems lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 19, 2015 at 5:46 PM hmmm, I can think of several guys this might be!! we have a lot of talented poets around here. CUTE one. Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 5:47 PM Hint - it's not written about the lovely Darren lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. November 19, 2015 at 4:31 PM Jan, as I was reading I was thinking to myself who is he? I stil don't know but this was a well written piece that had my full attention. Great job!:-) Alexis 7 Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 4:32 PM I will never let on lol - but he knows who he is:-) hugs jan xx

Etienne Lariviere November 19, 2015 at 4:04 PM A very enticing poem, I am jealous. Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 4:07 PM No need to be jealous Etienne :-) I hope this will be read by the person it is intended for - but I will never admit who it is lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud November 19, 2015 at 2:13 PM my, this is really sweet and contagious ( love bug), jan... you hubby must be so proud of this enticing piece.. did you read it to him?..huggs Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 2:25 PM yes he's read it and he knows the poet its dedicated to - I'm hoping that he drops by to read it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong November 19, 2015 at 1:58 PM This is SWEET Jan! My husband is happy I can share my poetry with others who love poetry as much as I do, so it is great your husband is also understanding. Cheers, Connie Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 2:02 PM My hubby is great and he encourages me 100% with my poetry journey and I rely on him to help me when I get stuck for a word or idea:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath November 19, 2015 at 12:26 PM You are truly free and frank so you have expressed about loving of poems of a poet friend and told your hubby. It's a tribute to a poet. Beautifully done. Loved always,bl Jan Allison November 19, 2015 at 12:30 PM Thanks BL there are many here I would love to meet and this is a fun tribute to a friend here - lol:-) hugs jan xx