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I Love You More Than Chocolate

I love you more than chocolate
Your actions are so sweet
I think you are a super guy and one I’d love to meet
Tall or short, dark or fair it matters not to me
I think you are amazing and other people here agree

I’ve told my hubby all about you
He thinks your poems are really cool
My hubby he’s a diamond  - a very precious jewel
So when you’re on your world tour just take a little time
To meet up for a cup of tea – I think we’d get on fine 

19th November 2015

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Kim Merryman Date: 11/20/2015 11:07:00 PM A cute write, Jan! Love, Kim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/21/2015 3:07:00 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 11/20/2015 3:33:00 PM Nice tribute to your s(o)uper guy, Jan! It's lovely to have an understanding husband:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 11/20/2015 4:09:00 PM :) same here :) Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:37:00 PM There are many souper guys here Paul:-) I am so so lucky to have met you and have you as a special friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Bettridge Date: 11/20/2015 3:38:00 AM Thanks Jan (lol) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:41:00 AM Shhh Rob lol:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/20/2015 2:15:00 AM - He's the best chocolate that exist, and you do not have to share him with anyone ..... all yours !!! - Lovely and sweet, Jan - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:14:00 AM Thanks Anne Lise - friendships are precious:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/20/2015 12:18:00 AM I have a question, if he ever doesn't show up, is there like a second choice? Do I have a chance at all here? :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:14:00 AM Depends if you bring me an orchid for my collection lol:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 11/19/2015 9:21:00 PM Very nice n' sweet Jan! Excellent pen!A 7!In his light God bless you! Wishing you a very lovely day!:) Hugs! D. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:13:00 AM Thanks Dorian:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 11/19/2015 7:03:00 PM Wow I sure love chocolate! especially that kinda chocolate, I think I am jealous too!!!!! Very seductive! Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/20/2015 3:13:00 AM He is special as I have written of my love of plain chocolate in poems lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2015 5:46:00 PM hmmm, I can think of several guys this might be!! we have a lot of talented poets around here. CUTE one. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 5:47:00 PM Hint - it's not written about the lovely Darren lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 11/19/2015 4:31:00 PM Jan, as I was reading I was thinking to myself who is he? I stil don't know but this was a well written piece that had my full attention. Great job!:-) Alexis 7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 4:32:00 PM I will never let on lol - but he knows who he is:-) hugs jan xx

Etienne Lariviere Date: 11/19/2015 4:04:00 PM A very enticing poem, I am jealous. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 4:07:00 PM No need to be jealous Etienne :-) I hope this will be read by the person it is intended for - but I will never admit who it is lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/19/2015 2:13:00 PM my, this is really sweet and contagious ( love bug), jan... you hubby must be so proud of this enticing piece.. did you read it to him?..huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 2:25:00 PM yes he's read it and he knows the poet its dedicated to - I'm hoping that he drops by to read it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/19/2015 1:58:00 PM This is SWEET Jan! My husband is happy I can share my poetry with others who love poetry as much as I do, so it is great your husband is also understanding. Cheers, Connie Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 2:02:00 PM My hubby is great and he encourages me 100% with my poetry journey and I rely on him to help me when I get stuck for a word or idea:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath Date: 11/19/2015 12:26:00 PM You are truly free and frank so you have expressed about loving of poems of a poet friend and told your hubby. It's a tribute to a poet. Beautifully done. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/19/2015 12:30:00 PM Thanks BL there are many here I would love to meet and this is a fun tribute to a friend here - lol:-) hugs jan xx