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I Love You Mom

Mom is still with me

   her body and soul are here

       sadly her eyes stare

           she has outlived destiny

                only memories remain...

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Debbie Guzzi

November 15, 2011 at 6:33 PM

you just look in the mirror and you see her in your own eyes so happy to hear from you..will be SF in Jan can you come down?

James Fraser

April 18, 2011 at 10:43 AM

What lovely memories Sharon, lovely poem dedicated to your mum....:) xxx

Dana Smith

March 30, 2011 at 3:41 PM

Wonderful poetry, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn

Andrea Dietrich

March 30, 2011 at 2:40 PM

oh, my, does your mom have that terrible disease my stepdad got years ago? I wonder if we can still say it's her soul. Maybe the soul goes to some other level until they can be released to death and a new life. Very good one, Sharon, especially for those who can relate.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 25, 2011 at 5:48 PM

Sweet and sensitive write Shar... a loving tribute to Mom.. I miss mine so ... u have described elder life perfectly luv.. happy weekend.. feeling your pain .. my friend...luv.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 24, 2011 at 9:37 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Shar. Love, Carol