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Party, Good Morning, Mother, Daughter, Child, Love

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"My healthy arm will be your stay; And I will smooth your pain away; And when I see you hang your head; It will be my turn to watch your bed; And tears of sweet affection shed. " Quote - from Ann Taylor's poem, My Mother I will turn back the pages of sorrow, to the sad May day my mother left me; the details recalled each 'morn and 'morrow, as her breath became gasps- I did not flee. Then, stood by her coffin screaming inside, tears falling, whispering- oh, why God why; she had left me on Mother's Day that year, to her cold headstone my thoughts often glide; I set her free- so up, up she could fly, turn off life support . . . I said with a tear ! Mother was my very best friend always, loved her garden and country adventures; mom, so calm even when roads were a maze, so we would stop the car to take pictures. Our home had a huge vast sunny garden, since a child I helped mom with the flowers; those days are some of my best memories, nesting close by we had a Blue Martin; we could linger there for - hours, hours and hours, Mother's day . . . will be lost in reveries ! I never met a more joyful kind soul, my sweet mom embraced every single day; to others she had so much self-control, mother was happy and gay everyday. She made each birthday a celebration, each Christmas Day . . . gifts, family and food; I was mothers decoration helper, think that I was often her frustration; always to my poetry she was glued, my mom was my rock, true north and shelter ! ____________________ April 28, 2022 Poetry/Ode/'I Love You Mom' Copyright Protected, ID 04-1451-480-28 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Mother's Love Tribute of Love for Mother's Day sponsor, BJ Legros Kelley, Judged 05/03/2022 First Place

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Date: 5/25/2022 2:23:00 PM
A great tribute my friend
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Constance La France
Date: 5/25/2022 2:35:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/20/2022 2:00:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your mother Constance, such wonderful memories you have. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
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Date: 5/20/2022 3:58:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, yes, wonderful memories, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/5/2022 8:45:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. So Beautiful. Enjoy your win/day with blessings........................
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2022 9:31:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/3/2022 8:29:00 PM
Constance, my tears are just falling even as I type this to you. Your mama left such a beautiful heart's imprint on you. I am so blessed and honored that you shared this incredibly and deeply written masterpiece of undying love. What a great honor of tribute to your mama. God bless you Constance, if I could hug you I would. Congratulations precious poetess <3
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2022 12:54:00 AM
BJ, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, the beautiful comment, compliment and congratulations, my mother was such a wonderful woman, I like to think that she is tending one of God's gardens up there, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/3/2022 4:00:00 PM
My mom was the same to me, Constance. I now believe there are others like her. She's probably made friends with them in heaven. lol She seemed so Godly to me, perfect as my mother though I know she must have sinned at some point in her life. Thanks for your lovely tribute poem honoring your relationship with your mother and drawing my heart to the memories of mine. Love and blessings, Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2022 12:57:00 AM
Bill, thank you so much for the nice comment, and compliment, I am sure my mom must have sinned along the way, although not that I ever witnessed, but nobody is perfect, I will say that she never hurt another person ever, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/2/2022 3:55:00 PM
Constance, I agree with Connie. This is a lovely reflection on your relationship with your mother filled with treasured memories. How blessed you were to have such a mother - light, beauty and grace. Thank you for sharing her with all of us. Hugs and blessings for your Mother's Day. Will think of you and send you a prayer.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2022 9:04:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem about my mother, if I can be even half the person she was I would be blessed, yes, Mother's Day is always difficult for me but to honor my mom I am preparing my own small garden, it is always a Zen place and I feel her spirit there, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/29/2022 11:50:00 PM
What a lovely tribute this is to your dear mother Constance. You were fortunate to know such a mother’s love. I am sorry you no longer have her with you, but she dwells in your heart. Blessings xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 4/30/2022 7:22:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the compliment, compassion and comment. I was a very lucky girl. Mom died too young, too soon, yes, the love will last forever, blessings _Constance
Date: 4/29/2022 2:28:00 AM
What a lovely picture that went with the poem!! Perfect ode to your lovely mom!!
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Date: 4/29/2022 7:59:00 AM
Swetha, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for the compliment on the image and poem, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/28/2022 1:10:00 PM
A lovely deep felt Ode to your amazing Mom! What sweet memories you have to cherish, to relive everyday. Blessings, Paulette
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2022 4:56:00 PM
Paulette, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, yes I do, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/28/2022 11:16:00 AM
A "Beautiful" write and picture. Love It. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.....................
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2022 4:57:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~Constance

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