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I Love You, I Love You

I see you everyday getting out of your bus I feel your presence walking in the streets of Damascus whenever I see you smile, an unexpected pleasure falls on me for a while you re my day and you re my night I can even bare your fight just if you become mine everything in this world will become fine I can wait for you till my hairs become grey you ve become my last and only pray I follow you everyday till you disappear but an elder told me that first of all they always miss later they become your mrs everytime you re in a different suit sometime black green or blue I love you, that s something which is true you look so gorgeous that I sometime imagine that is it really you? I love you, I love you how and why, I doesn t got any clue I love you, I love you you re in my dreams, you re in my thoughts I imagine you whenever I m alone whether it s day or it s night whether I m eating or sleeping my loneliness makes me weeping but whenever I see you I don t even have 1% of confidence where all of it is, I got no clue there are just 3 words which looks like climbing a tree which continuesly grew I just want to say to you that i love you, I love you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2018 5:02:00 PM

I came way back into your poetry and found this charming love poem. I love it, Faraz.

Al Juman

Date: 7/9/2018 11:55:00 AM

Love is love it never go away even if you only your eyes meet

Cynthia Ur

Date: 4/24/2018 2:12:00 AM

This is an absolutely beautiful poem about love, so romantic and passionate! I love this poem greatly and can feel the emotion you potray. Well done!

Yuhi Musinga

Date: 4/9/2018 3:32:00 AM

Very romantic

Yuhi Musinga

Date: 4/9/2018 3:32:00 AM

Very romantic

Hus Sain

Date: 11/10/2017 6:28:00 AM

Such an amazing description of love, you truly are an amazing writer, ;)))

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/29/2017 7:17:00 AM

You write beautifully, Faraz, love is truly great, and you have expressed it well:) my only suggestion is you could improve your grammar:)

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/28/2017 7:38:00 AM

To love someone like this is the best feeling. Very expressive, Faraz, well done!

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2017 5:55:00 AM

VEry romantic with some excellent lines...

Dahlia Cristobal

Date: 7/28/2017 1:45:00 AM

Honestly,your ideas and feelings are true,,but you can create and present them more magical and poetic if you use figures of speech.So that,your words would not run just like an ordinary sentence broken into lines.

Ashley Rainwater

Date: 7/26/2017 11:11:00 AM

this is very good heart felt my friend..:)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/16/2017 6:13:00 AM

Excellent and very passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Dilys Brown

Date: 6/29/2017 4:57:00 AM

I loved Everything is Not As We Want It so true Faraz. Well done for trying so hard to write English as this is not your first language I think. Keep on writing.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/20/2017 10:51:00 AM

Nice picture you paint with your words up there :)

Matilda Divx

Date: 6/19/2017 5:51:00 AM

Among ur published Poem this is my favorite.Dealt excellent way of approaching in bringing up ur thoughts.Simply I like it.

Angga Kusumadinata

Date: 6/18/2017 6:43:00 PM

I smile and keep laughing to read it because it's so same with what I ever felt before. :). It's a good poem, I enjoy to read it. I thank you for the story.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/18/2017 2:22:00 AM

Hi Faraz.... You asked to give you my honest opinion, so here it is; You are very passionate young man. You are certainly in love, but personally I am not too crazy about free verse style of poetry. Although, you have painted a nice picture about you and your love; but a poem must have rhythm and rhyme. To me a good poem should be hard to translate. After you submit your poems check for small errors "i" and place a period at the end of a sentence.

Bernard Chan

Date: 6/17/2017 8:02:00 PM

The simplicity of the poem lets the passion shine through. Wonderful!

Pintu Chandra Deb

Date: 6/17/2017 11:10:00 AM

Very passionate written. Awesome!!

Jocelyn Dunbar

Date: 6/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

As you go in life your emotion will improve and mature, you still a long way to have heaps of experiences in life. Keep doing to write what you're feeling.