I Love You, Daddy, But: -Charles Wood-

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How much time do you think I have? And, yeah, I know, Dad You're real pissed at me. And my boyfriend, Harry You want us to marry but that's not the way that we see. We want this baby we both think that maybe marriage isn't where we want to be. There you stand yellin' at Mom who is tellin' you this ain't the way things should be. Just back off your high horse and then let life's will of course teach you some needed humility. Love, Your Daughter (remember me?)

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/26/2013 2:45:00 PM

Hmm...Not so sure whether this could not be a scene from early history.' I am always comparing views; also perceptions of people e t c..)

Chung-Hoon Chung

Date: 9/21/2013 2:52:00 AM

Great write

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2013 1:21:00 AM

a very modernized take on the story!! You got it right for today's world, Nancy!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2013 8:09:00 PM

enjoyed your take on the theme...it's so today's world...very nicely written poem! Good luck in the contest!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2013 7:24:00 AM

a punchy, refreshing write with a unique take on the theme, my deal soul sistah.... you amaze!.. thanks for the honor of placing in your contest.. i enjoyed imagining how those insects were whacking your cute rear, lol... nice to see you here again.. missed ya!..:) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2013 12:18:00 AM

Nice letter with sensible appeal to the father, Nancy. Good luck