I Love You

I love you for the very thing that love and joy can bring; I love you for the very day you took my breath away; I love you still my very heart, and we can never part; I'll love you till the very End because of Him i know i can.

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Verlecia Fields

Date: 5/8/2017 12:04:00 PM

the poem made me think of - the greatest love - the love of God - and how it makes all love even greater

John Leong
Date: 5/12/2017 12:14:00 PM

thank you, Verlecia, for you kind words; i like this especially too; in His grace we do find, care for and ultimately give back Love. God bless!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2017 4:30:00 PM

Lovely little poem, JOhn. You could classify it as "rhyme" Are you brand new here? WElcome to Soup.

John Leong
Date: 3/28/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! yes i'm new here, just started a few days ago. i'm glad you liked it, and i hope to produce more soon, with the right muse.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/26/2017 2:24:00 PM

This is so nice, John! Thanks for sharing :)

John Leong
Date: 3/28/2017 12:01:00 PM

thanks, Heidi! i hope you found it nice. i'm trying more next time with inspiration from God, of course!