I Love You

I love you I never kissed I never touched Yet I know We are one So now I hang my head Alone I am all done Death becomes me more and more Without you life has become a bore I mount my horse and ride off Into the mountains high I am battle ready A heart so scared They call me brave heart, fierce and bold I battle the infidels, behead em all I am no brave lad, tiss for sure If I was I would battle you For your love I long Like spring flowers growing in battle scared fields I have lost this war of passion I seek You have castrated this warrior tall Of Passions woes I lie down In graveyards sowed

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Meg Anderson

Date: 12/12/2014 7:14:00 PM

Arthur, intense and full of honesty. I can feel the love and anguish. Great write. Meg

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2014 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Meg!

Christian Alexander

Date: 12/12/2014 12:24:00 AM

I like it. I know how touch feel. Just go ask her out

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2014 10:46:00 PM

a poignant poem with an "old world" feel to it. Like something from Camelot!! Nice seeing this one today, Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/12/2014 7:29:00 PM

Thank you Andrea , this is such a beautiful compliment as thats what I was attempting to do thank you so so much!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/11/2014 7:59:00 AM

Quite the story! I'm looking for a soprano for my choir, it seems you have the qualifications.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:22:00 PM

hahahahaha, you are getting even better than me! Thanks Richard

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/11/2014 5:27:00 AM

Very beautiful pen Arthur! Your poem is kind of sad for your love but still so romantic and sweet it really flows just like water from a fountain, dear friend.Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for you! Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:20:00 PM

With such nice compliments I will soon have to put you on the payroll!!! Thank you so much Dorian. :)