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I Love You

I love you
I never kissed
I never touched
Yet I know
We are one
So now I hang my head
Alone
I am all done
Death becomes me more and more
Without you life has become a bore
I mount my horse and ride off
Into the mountains high
I am battle ready
A heart so scared
They call me brave heart, fierce and bold
I battle the infidels, behead em all
I am no brave lad, tiss for sure
If I was
I would battle you
For your love I long
Like spring flowers growing in battle scared fields
I have lost this war of passion I seek
You have castrated this warrior tall
Of Passions woes
I lie down
In graveyards sowed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/12/2014 9:24:00 PM
Arthur, this is such an incredibly appealing write.. I love it!
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/12/2014 9:26:00 PM
Thanks Dave, long time no see, hope all is well with you!
Date: 12/12/2014 7:14:00 PM
Arthur, intense and full of honesty. I can feel the love and anguish. Great write. Meg
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Meg!
Date: 12/12/2014 12:24:00 AM
I like it. I know how touch feel. Just go ask her out
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Date: 12/11/2014 10:46:00 PM
a poignant poem with an "old world" feel to it. Like something from Camelot!! Nice seeing this one today, Arthur.
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Andrea , this is such a beautiful compliment as thats what I was attempting to do thank you so so much!
Date: 12/11/2014 7:59:00 AM
Quite the story! I'm looking for a soprano for my choir, it seems you have the qualifications.
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:22:00 PM
hahahahaha, you are getting even better than me! Thanks Richard
Date: 12/11/2014 5:27:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Arthur! Your poem is kind of sad for your love but still so romantic and sweet it really flows just like water from a fountain, dear friend.Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for you! Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D.
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:20:00 PM
With such nice compliments I will soon have to put you on the payroll!!! Thank you so much Dorian. :)
Date: 12/11/2014 3:47:00 AM
It is never to late...mount back up on that horse and ride to her.
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:19:00 PM
LOL Tim the first time I read this comment, I didnt see the "to" at the end!!!!
Date: 12/11/2014 3:34:00 AM
- So sad,Arthur ..... to love .... and not be loved - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:17:00 PM
So true Anne Lise, thanks for your lovely comments!
Date: 12/11/2014 2:20:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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arthur vaso
Date: 12/11/2014 9:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Ravi