Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

I Love You

I love you
I never kissed
I never touched
Yet I know
We are one
So now I hang my head
Alone
I am all done
Death becomes me more and more
Without you life has become a bore
I mount my horse and ride off
Into the mountains high
I am battle ready
A heart so scared
They call me brave heart, fierce and bold
I battle the infidels, behead em all
I am no brave lad, tiss for sure
If I was
I would battle you
For your love I long
Like spring flowers growing in battle scared fields
I have lost this war of passion I seek
You have castrated this warrior tall
Of Passions woes
I lie down
In graveyards sowed

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Meg Anderson December 12, 2014 at 7:14 PM Arthur, intense and full of honesty. I can feel the love and anguish. Great write. Meg Arthur Vaso December 12, 2014 at 7:29 PM Thank you so much Meg!

Christian Alexander December 12, 2014 at 12:24 AM I like it. I know how touch feel. Just go ask her out

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2014 at 10:46 PM a poignant poem with an "old world" feel to it. Like something from Camelot!! Nice seeing this one today, Arthur. Arthur Vaso December 12, 2014 at 7:29 PM Thank you Andrea , this is such a beautiful compliment as thats what I was attempting to do thank you so so much!

Dorian Petersen Potter December 11, 2014 at 5:27 AM Very beautiful pen Arthur! Your poem is kind of sad for your love but still so romantic and sweet it really flows just like water from a fountain, dear friend.Truly enjoyed it! A 7 for you! Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D. Arthur Vaso December 11, 2014 at 9:20 PM With such nice compliments I will soon have to put you on the payroll!!! Thank you so much Dorian. :)

Tim Smith December 11, 2014 at 3:47 AM It is never to late...mount back up on that horse and ride to her. Arthur Vaso December 11, 2014 at 9:19 PM LOL Tim the first time I read this comment, I didnt see the "to" at the end!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2014 at 3:34 AM - So sad,Arthur ..... to love .... and not be loved - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Arthur Vaso December 11, 2014 at 9:17 PM So true Anne Lise, thanks for your lovely comments!

Ravi Sathasivam December 11, 2014 at 2:20 AM Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Arthur Vaso December 11, 2014 at 9:17 PM Thank you very much Ravi