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Each time I think of you I'm breathless I feel your presence ev'ry where I go through life on turned back pages Of memories...........the past. Your pictures line my walls like shadows The biggest one is in my heart I feel your warm breath on my shoulder And it makes me wild as chills run up and down my spine. And when I feel your hand take mine so gently The hand that softly brushed my cheek Knowing that you're here with me this moment I, can hardly speak, can hardly speak We walked these streets once in the sunshine I hear your laughter echo near Each step I take your perfume fills my senses and it Makes me smile oh Lord it makes me smile. In darkest night I'd lay beside you Holding you tight I'd long for more The taste of your lips made me tremble Un till at last............at last And now vast emptiness beside me I gently stroke where you once lay And whisper softly can you hear me As I'm calling out your name I'm calling out your name. And when I feel your hand take mine so gently The hand that softly brushed my cheek I know you're here with me this moment I cannot speak, I cannot speak. Each time I think of you I'm breathless I feel your presence ev'ry where I feel your warm breath on my shoulder And it makes me wild as chills run up and down my spine. As chills run up and down my spine As chills run up and down my spine. 09.09.2014 Contest: Your Most Romantic Poem of 2014

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Date: 1/20/2015 9:11:00 AM
So very beautiful and romantic, Brenda. I don't know how I missed this one before, but it really touched my heart so much. My heartfelt congratulations to you for your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:40:00 PM
Back for a third time and still chills run up my back. Congratulations on your win! I don't know what took me so long you know how much I love the person you are. Your heart large and always you are kind. So stupid me I am happy I get another chance to add this sublime poem to my favs. It makes me cry in a good way. Love You Lots, Armand.
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Date: 1/18/2015 1:02:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats on your great win Brenda...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:06:00 PM
congratulations Brenda for this winning write,well done
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:38:00 PM
Oh! I must have missed this beauty before! Congratulations on your fine win, Brenda! I am touched by this melancholic poem, oozing gently from the soul and leaving a trail of love in its wake. Well done! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/17/2015 1:08:00 PM
Dropping back again to say many congrats on your win Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/17/2015 4:57:00 AM
Nicely done on love, congrats on the win, Brenda
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Date: 10/13/2014 12:42:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem Brenda. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/28/2014 9:34:00 AM
this is a true love story, a nice strength of feelings to the music, great job! hugs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/28/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thank you Margaret
Date: 9/27/2014 9:06:00 PM
Brenda this is great I played the music and sung the words ....Seren
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/28/2014 7:05:00 PM
Glad you liked it Seren thanks.
Date: 9/27/2014 3:28:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/28/2014 7:04:00 PM
Hugs Jan, thanks.
Date: 9/27/2014 3:16:00 PM
I am back again Brenda. Congratulations on your win.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/28/2014 7:04:00 PM
Thanks Maurice
Date: 9/9/2014 6:25:00 PM
This is perfect with the song in Craig's contest: I recognized immediately the rhythm of the beautiful words !! I too, had to make it about lost love...it just seems to indicate that kind of feeling! This is gorgeous and so melancholic !! He will love it!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 7:50:00 PM
Thanks Carrie, I'll come take a look.
Date: 9/9/2014 3:55:00 PM
wow, BRenda, as I read it, I was thinking. This just HAS to be for a song! and I was right. I love it. You really captured what the judge wanted from you for his contest. At least I sure hope he thinks so!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 3:58:00 PM
Me too Andrea, snicker snicker.
Date: 9/9/2014 3:40:00 PM
This is excellent.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Maurice.
Date: 9/9/2014 11:16:00 AM
This sent chills up and down my spine Brenda it is SO good! good luck int eh contest - its a 7 from me! Your pictures line my walls like shadows The biggest one is in my heart - incredible lines!!!! Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan, you fill my cup with compliments. XXXXOOOO
Date: 9/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
Lovely take on the theme of the contest, Brenda. good luckl
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Dr. Mehta.

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