Mohammad Yamin Poet Rhyme

I Love You

In summer night when the sky is blue
When in hearts passions ignite
When the clouds shower a sprinkle or two
When desires brighten the darkness of night

When in the skies the stars wink
When butterflies sleep and night bird’s awake
When fountains flow with serenity’s drink
When the sound of breathing, the silence break

When thoughts are dressed in colorful gowns
When the breeze is pregnant with love’s fragrance
When the time in the lake of enchantment drowns
When in ecstasy the whirling Sufis dance

When my soul in agony of despair writhes
When swords of loneliness are out of sheaths
I care not whether false or true
Whisper in my ears, “I love you”
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Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2013 at 2:15 PM Mohammad , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD Mohammad Yamin January 2, 2013 at 7:44 AM Thanks PD for your very thoughtful New Year Greetings. I am deeply touched. May 2013 bring for you all the joy in the world and sun shine of love and welbeing. May you have a happy, productive and prosperous New Year. Love

Jennifer Abrams March 15, 2012 at 1:01 PM "I care not whether false or true".........many times have I had this feeling..........you captured a raw emotion very well.......amazing work really Mohammad Yamin March 17, 2012 at 12:36 PM Thanks Jennifer for reading my poem and your amazing comments. You have captured the true spirit of my poem. The lines demonstrate the desperation.

Elizabeth Wesley February 6, 2012 at 8:55 PM I think love poems move me the most and yours is so much so. It has a gentleness and seems to dance between the lines. Thanks for sharing your gift. :) Mohammad Yamin February 7, 2012 at 12:20 PM Dear Elizabeth, I am thrilled to read your views about my poem. Your going over my poem over and over again is an overwhelming evidence of your heartfelt appreciation of my poem, I am grateful. God Bless You. -Mohammad

Jasmine Murphy January 16, 2012 at 6:17 PM started reading from poets i never searched before and you are my first. this piece,so filled and saturated with true feelings of love. heavy and deep emotions that take peoples mind on a journeyand make us lost in our own imaginary world. absolutely wonderfully written! i look forward to reading more Mohammad Yamin January 17, 2012 at 10:55 AM What a tremendous tribute, Jasmine. You have turned me from nobody to somebody. I appreciate your highly uplifting comments. You are spoiling me. -Mohammad

Judy Ball December 29, 2011 at 10:21 AM This is so very lovely my friend. Beautifully spoken and so filled with deep emotion. Well Done. God Bless , JB Mohammad Yamin December 29, 2011 at 11:16 AM Dear Judy, Thanks for your heartwarming comments on my poem. You are very kind. Happy New Year. -Mohammad

Audrey Haick December 4, 2011 at 5:35 PM Exquisite and eloquent. Thoroughly enjoyed, Mohammad. Beautifully written...will fav. this. Have a great week! Love, Annalise Mohammad Yamin December 6, 2011 at 2:45 PM Dear Annalise, Thanks for your most precious comments. I am thrilled -Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen December 4, 2011 at 10:50 AM I will keep this poem in my heart,lovely! OXOX Anne-Lise from winter Norway Mohammad Yamin December 6, 2011 at 2:05 PM Dear Anne, Your comments have touched me deeply. Thanks a million. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley November 26, 2011 at 6:17 PM So full of emotion and energy. I feel like dancing to the melody of this lovely verse. P S Such a nice picture of you my friend! Mohammad Yamin November 27, 2011 at 5:00 PM Thanks Elizabeth for your uplifting comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Mohammad Taha Effendi November 7, 2011 at 11:20 PM Breathtaking write. Such beautiful imagery and mastery of phrases to personify nature. You inspire me. Mohammad Yamin November 10, 2011 at 6:28 PM Thanks Taha for your heart warming appreciation. These compliments mean a lot to me.

Gwendolen Song November 3, 2011 at 2:16 AM Whoever u wrote this for should be swept off her feet...lovely as a rose with morning dew.... Gwendolen Mohammad Yamin November 3, 2011 at 8:28 AM Thanks Gwendolen for your touching comments. You are very kind. -Mohammad

Laura Breidenthal November 1, 2011 at 6:25 PM If I can sum this up in one word: beautiful!!! Always, Laura Mohammad Yamin November 1, 2011 at 6:51 PM Thanks, Laura. I like your summing up -Mohammad

Sara Kendrick October 29, 2011 at 6:10 PM So passionate of a write..Very romantically penned..Enjoyed reading..Sara Mohammad Yamin October 30, 2011 at 7:28 PM Your encouraging comments have given me great joy, Sara. Thank you so much. -Mohammad

M.I.A . October 29, 2011 at 5:03 AM WoW! this piece really shows the depth, the diversity, the experience and the maturity of a poet's heart. very beautifully written sir Mohammad Yamin October 29, 2011 at 5:40 PM I am grateful to you Mia for your awe inspiring comments. You are so kind. -Mohammad

October 28, 2011 at 6:31 PM Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen Mohammad Yamin October 28, 2011 at 7:15 PM Thanks Karen, for your heart warming comment. You are very kind. -Mohammad

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 25, 2011 at 4:58 PM Mohammad this is a glorious emotional write luv.. such visual analogies take the reader's breath away and it is mesmerizing and haunting in presentatiion luv.. thankxx for your sweet critique on my contest entry ..much appreciated... Mohammad Yamin October 25, 2011 at 5:34 PM I am thrilled to read your comment, Lindas. I am sooooo.... grateful for your enchanting words. -Mohammad

Poet Destroyer A October 25, 2011 at 10:45 AM I need to keep this in mind... especially on my blue days...Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D. Mohammad Yamin October 25, 2011 at 5:37 PM Thanks for your most encouraging comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley October 25, 2011 at 10:28 AM When I read this, I am transported into all the beautiful places you describe. Romantic with that special touch of emotion that moves the reader. Very special my friend. Mohammad Yamin October 25, 2011 at 5:42 PM Elizabeth! Thank you soooo.....much for your appreciation of my poem. I am indebted to you for your kindness. -Mohammad

Dinda Minardi October 25, 2011 at 8:42 AM I love this poem. It spreads its own beauty while we read it... I love your poems, Moh. Mohammad Yamin October 25, 2011 at 10:05 AM Thanks Dinda, for your charming comments. The beauty is in the eye of beholder. I am grateful. -Mohammad

Joyce Johnson October 24, 2011 at 6:21 PM True poetry here Mohammed. I very much liked it. I am glad you made your kind comments on my latest so that I could find you. Love, Joyce Mohammad Yamin October 25, 2011 at 9:53 AM Thanks for reading my poem and for your encouraging comments. Have a nice day. -Mohammad

Audrey Haick October 24, 2011 at 9:32 AM Beautiful Rhyme penned only from the heart, Mohammed. Beautiful. Love, Annalise Mohammad Yamin October 24, 2011 at 10:48 AM Thanks Annalise, for your kind words. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2011 at 7:12 AM I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Mahammad. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2011 at 9:48 AM Mohammad, sorry I misspelled your name in last comment. Love, Carol Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2011 at 9:46 AM Thank you Mohammed Mohammad Yamin October 24, 2011 at 9:03 AM Yes Carol, there seemed to be a vacuum in life during the time Soup was off air. Soup has become an integral part of us and a link between a group of beautiful people sharing their feelings through their enchanting poetry. How can you live without reading Carol Brown. Regards. Mohammad