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I Love You

In summer night when the sky is blue When in hearts passions ignite When the clouds shower a sprinkle or two When desires brighten the darkness of night When in the skies the stars wink When butterflies sleep and night bird’s awake When fountains flow with serenity’s drink When the sound of breathing, the silence break When thoughts are dressed in colorful gowns When the breeze is pregnant with love’s fragrance When the time in the lake of enchantment drowns When in ecstasy the whirling Sufis dance When my soul in agony of despair writhes When swords of loneliness are out of sheaths I care not whether false or true Whisper in my ears, “I love you” ---

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 2:15:00 PM

Mohammad , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/2/2013 7:44:00 AM

Thanks PD for your very thoughtful New Year Greetings. I am deeply touched. May 2013 bring for you all the joy in the world and sun shine of love and welbeing. May you have a happy, productive and prosperous New Year. Love

Jennifer Abrams

Date: 3/15/2012 1:01:00 PM

"I care not whether false or true".........many times have I had this feeling..........you captured a raw emotion very well.......amazing work really

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/17/2012 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer for reading my poem and your amazing comments. You have captured the true spirit of my poem. The lines demonstrate the desperation.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/6/2012 8:55:00 PM

I think love poems move me the most and yours is so much so. It has a gentleness and seems to dance between the lines. Thanks for sharing your gift. :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/7/2012 12:20:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, I am thrilled to read your views about my poem. Your going over my poem over and over again is an overwhelming evidence of your heartfelt appreciation of my poem, I am grateful. God Bless You. -Mohammad

Jasmine Murphy

Date: 1/16/2012 6:17:00 PM

started reading from poets i never searched before and you are my first. this piece,so filled and saturated with true feelings of love. heavy and deep emotions that take peoples mind on a journeyand make us lost in our own imaginary world. absolutely wonderfully written! i look forward to reading more

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 1/17/2012 10:55:00 AM

What a tremendous tribute, Jasmine. You have turned me from nobody to somebody. I appreciate your highly uplifting comments. You are spoiling me. -Mohammad

Judy Ball

Date: 12/29/2011 10:21:00 AM

This is so very lovely my friend. Beautifully spoken and so filled with deep emotion. Well Done. God Bless , JB

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/29/2011 11:16:00 AM

Dear Judy, Thanks for your heartwarming comments on my poem. You are very kind. Happy New Year. -Mohammad

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2011 5:35:00 PM

Exquisite and eloquent. Thoroughly enjoyed, Mohammad. Beautifully written...will fav. this. Have a great week! Love, Annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/6/2011 2:45:00 PM

Dear Annalise, Thanks for your most precious comments. I am thrilled -Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/4/2011 10:50:00 AM

I will keep this poem in my heart,lovely! OXOX Anne-Lise from winter Norway

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 12/6/2011 2:05:00 PM

Dear Anne, Your comments have touched me deeply. Thanks a million. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/26/2011 6:17:00 PM

So full of emotion and energy. I feel like dancing to the melody of this lovely verse. P S Such a nice picture of you my friend!

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/27/2011 5:00:00 PM

Thanks Elizabeth for your uplifting comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 11/7/2011 11:20:00 PM

Breathtaking write. Such beautiful imagery and mastery of phrases to personify nature. You inspire me.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/10/2011 6:28:00 PM

Thanks Taha for your heart warming appreciation. These compliments mean a lot to me.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/3/2011 2:16:00 AM

Whoever u wrote this for should be swept off her feet...lovely as a rose with morning dew.... Gwendolen

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/3/2011 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Gwendolen for your touching comments. You are very kind. -Mohammad

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/1/2011 6:25:00 PM

If I can sum this up in one word: beautiful!!! Always, Laura

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 11/1/2011 6:51:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. I like your summing up -Mohammad

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/29/2011 6:10:00 PM

So passionate of a write..Very romantically penned..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/30/2011 7:28:00 PM

Your encouraging comments have given me great joy, Sara. Thank you so much. -Mohammad

M.I.A .

Date: 10/29/2011 5:03:00 AM

WoW! this piece really shows the depth, the diversity, the experience and the maturity of a poet's heart. very beautifully written sir

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/29/2011 5:40:00 PM

I am grateful to you Mia for your awe inspiring comments. You are so kind. -Mohammad

Date: 10/28/2011 6:31:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/28/2011 7:15:00 PM

Thanks Karen, for your heart warming comment. You are very kind. -Mohammad

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2011 4:58:00 PM

Mohammad this is a glorious emotional write luv.. such visual analogies take the reader's breath away and it is mesmerizing and haunting in presentatiion luv.. thankxx for your sweet critique on my contest entry ..much appreciated...

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/25/2011 5:34:00 PM

I am thrilled to read your comment, Lindas. I am sooooo.... grateful for your enchanting words. -Mohammad

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2011 10:45:00 AM

I need to keep this in mind... especially on my blue days...Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/25/2011 5:37:00 PM

Thanks for your most encouraging comments. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/25/2011 10:28:00 AM

When I read this, I am transported into all the beautiful places you describe. Romantic with that special touch of emotion that moves the reader. Very special my friend.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/25/2011 5:42:00 PM

Elizabeth! Thank you soooo.....much for your appreciation of my poem. I am indebted to you for your kindness. -Mohammad

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/25/2011 8:42:00 AM

I love this poem. It spreads its own beauty while we read it... I love your poems, Moh.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/25/2011 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Dinda, for your charming comments. The beauty is in the eye of beholder. I am grateful. -Mohammad

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/24/2011 6:21:00 PM

True poetry here Mohammed. I very much liked it. I am glad you made your kind comments on my latest so that I could find you. Love, Joyce

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/25/2011 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for reading my poem and for your encouraging comments. Have a nice day. -Mohammad

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/24/2011 9:32:00 AM

Beautiful Rhyme penned only from the heart, Mohammed. Beautiful. Love, Annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/24/2011 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Annalise, for your kind words. You have made my day. -Mohammad

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 7:12:00 AM

I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Mahammad. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/24/2011 9:48:00 AM

Mohammad, sorry I misspelled your name in last comment. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/24/2011 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Mohammed

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 10/24/2011 9:03:00 AM

Yes Carol, there seemed to be a vacuum in life during the time Soup was off air. Soup has become an integral part of us and a link between a group of beautiful people sharing their feelings through their enchanting poetry. How can you live without reading Carol Brown. Regards. Mohammad