I Love You

I completely love you, mi amore!

L ook inside the chambers of my heart and you'll see
O bserve these emotions that radiate from me
V isions of our future pictured in my mind's eye
E ach day my heart breathes, relieved, a sigh

Y ears from now we pray, together we'll still be
O ur flaws, secondary, our love will see
U ndeniably, unconditional, pure love indeed

Co-written w/#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Audrey this is a beautiful write from you and Jimmy.. I love the last line.. A favorite of mine :) love Wilma
Floro Avatar
March 12, 2010 at 10:31 AM
I LIKE THIS POEM.... YOU HAVE GREAT TALENT...
Pickett Avatar
March 10, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Ahhh Muy Bonita estas muy bonita....Bueno Very nice....Taz
Byrne Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 8:56 PM
Very nice................smile!
Knop Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Filled with love and desire, lovely Acrostic, Audrey! It is a pity that love can change sometimes into hatred. Keep writing and thank you for your kind commen...Love, Gert
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March 6, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Very sweet words Audrey and Jimmy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Oozing with feeling, love and desire. The mix of two, deserved perspire >> James,x
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March 5, 2010 at 7:37 AM
This is another beautiful one Audrey...Love it...Marty
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March 4, 2010 at 7:00 PM
U two are on a romantic roll with yet another glorious poem about our main subject .. LUV... such a joy to read..and ..yes.. I am flying pretty high right now ...as I can see by these words both of u inspire one another to create beauty... a wonderful write...luv.. Linda-Marie.. PS BBF.. I just read Guishi Goku.. all I can is AMAZING... wow.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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