Michaela Dowdy Poet Blank verse

I Love You

Iloveyou

yet, i hate you.

imissyou

yet,i want you to leave.

ineedyou

yet,i dont want you.

You broke my heart..

i fell apart..

You didn't help me when i needed you..

You laughed at my pain..

Made me feel invisable..

You wanted me back..

I tried to hide from you..

Everywhere i went, you followed..

I needed to hide..

I was too scared you'd find me..

So here i am..

Stuck in a relationship..

i'll never be able to excape from..

Help me get out..

Please..

You dont understand..

It's like being stuck in quick sand..

Everyone says relax..it'll be ok..wiggle out..

But when your terrified,,,you can't just sit there..

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Isa Mahrie February 26, 2010 at 7:27 AM i Guess some will experiance not only in love yet in general life ..... very well written :)

Skat A February 22, 2010 at 10:36 AM ENJOYED READING THIS .I TO FEEL TRAPED IN MY OWA LIFE...GREAT POEM OF THE WEEK...IRMA

James Fraser February 22, 2010 at 10:28 AM Many congratulations to you for your poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2010 at 6:16 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Madison. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Malcolm Dyer November 20, 2009 at 12:07 PM Your words ring true

Logan Saucillo November 19, 2009 at 12:34 PM i get this. i can totally relate

Charmaine Chircop November 16, 2009 at 10:18 PM your "thoughts'reminded me of a song ,i love yet i hate you then i love you",it was a fav song of mine//still is,,Sometimes love is a whole confusion..we have to let destiny take its toll--Charma

Simone Segal November 16, 2009 at 1:11 PM THOUGHTS! our minds, we ask ourselves questions all the time, going round and round in circles, but, the inner you knows for sure the right answers! If we only follow the truth in our mind, we could have the life we want, with a peaceful heart! Most of my poems are on this subject, love Simone