I Love You

You appeared out of nowhere
God must have kept you hidden as my surprise
waiting for the last possible moment
to save my love from demise

Your soul shined it's white light
and forced it's way through
passing by all my terrors and fears
and replacing them with feelings so new

you broke through my walls
with a graceful ease I have never seen
taking down brick by brick
examining each one for what it means.

you opened the locked door
pieced together my broken down soul
mended my distrusting heart
took my life in hand, and made it whole.

I want to know everything about you
each everlasting detail
like a long emotional love letter
sent to me through the mail

you make my heart flutter
like no one else ever could
and i freeze in position
in the exact spot where i last stood.

your sweet tenderness
melts my heart to it's core
wanting you - craving you
always needing more and more

your electrifying kisses
shocking each and every nerve
your passion filled hugs
warming each indent and curve.

as each day passes and the old clock ticks
my love for you continues to grow strong
while deep inside my heart
I know truly this is where i belong

I felt like i had waited an eternity
holding in what my heart knew was true
freeing my mind and thoughts
finally releasing those words - "I  Love You"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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Date: 2/5/2012 9:44:00 PM
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