Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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I Love To Hate You

Just one look at you
Tempting me, teasing me, tormenting me
I hate the feelings you evoke
Greed
Desire
Lust
Just want to hold you, devour you
I don’t want to see you go
But I can never resist the last chocolate in the box!

9th March 2015
Contest – Love or Hate – Pick a subject - Shadow Hamilton
I chose Love as my theme
~awarded 1st place~

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Afolabi Muideen May 1, 2015 at 11:07 PM Congratulation Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 4:43 AM Thanks so much Afolabi:-) Hugs jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane March 18, 2015 at 7:46 PM Glad to see this won, big congrats on a sweet win! Hugs Jan Allison March 19, 2015 at 5:14 AM Thanks Cecilia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Riss Ryker March 14, 2015 at 10:07 PM A delicious winner here! That last line was the bomb! Jan Allison March 15, 2015 at 5:49 AM Thanks Riss:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade March 14, 2015 at 9:44 PM A delicious poem -- dark chocolates are my favorites. Congratulations on the win . . . well deserved. all the very best. Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 9:53 PM Oh mine too David - we even put a block in dad's coffin as he loved it too lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mohamed Adel March 13, 2015 at 1:07 PM beautiful poem,Jan, Congrats :) Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:32 PM Many thanks for dropping by Mohamed:-) Hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels March 13, 2015 at 12:31 PM This made me smile Jan.. Can definitely understand your love/ hate relationship for chocolate here.. congratulations on your win as well ;) xx Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 6:31 PM Thanks so much Wilma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2015 at 8:13 AM Great to see you on top of the mountain, congratulations. Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 8:24 AM Thanks Richard - it doesn't happen often these days so I am basking in the glory lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Butterfly Mantra March 13, 2015 at 6:46 AM Congrats on your win Jan! Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 7:40 AM Thanks for dropping by -I LOVE your avatar it is stunning! Hugs jan xx

Grace Mutindi March 13, 2015 at 2:10 AM Hi Jan, Congrats on your win! Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 4:08 AM Thanks so much Grace:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 12, 2015 at 2:28 AM Wow Jan,, love to hate,, brilliant take! Congrats on top place win! Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 5:24 AM Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman March 11, 2015 at 7:12 PM Who can,congrats on your win with this scrumptious poem Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 7:14 PM Thanks so much for dropping by Greg:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2015 at 6:23 PM Congrats on an excellent and well deserved win! Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 6:27 PM Thanks Andrea I was made up with a first and Poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus March 11, 2015 at 1:39 PM The last chocolate tastes so good, especially if it's a winner!! Congratulations Jan!:) hugs // paul Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 3:09 PM It sure does Paul! Hugs jan xxx

Julia Ward March 11, 2015 at 8:56 AM Congratulations on your fine win, Jan! Hugs, Julia, xx Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 8:59 AM Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 11, 2015 at 6:13 AM A chocolaty hug for this poem. Congrats...Love Jan..Rajat Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 6:15 AM Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray March 11, 2015 at 5:21 AM The irresistible power of chocolate- Great!. Best Wishes Jan xx Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:41 AM Thanks so much William I am so so happy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 11, 2015 at 2:59 AM weeeee yes who will not be tempted to chocolates.. :D! but I love chocolates before but lately I start quitting from it. :D! sweet JAn hugs.. :D! BIG KUDOS! Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:41 AM Oh Olive do treat yourself from time to time:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 11, 2015 at 12:21 AM well...back again.... Grats!!!! Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:40 AM Thanks so much Cas am doubly happy now:-) Hugs Jan xx

A. H. Sewell March 10, 2015 at 10:13 PM Love and hate in the sweet :) Way to go, Jan! Congrats on the POD! Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:38 AM Thanks so much A H a double celebration I am so happy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight March 10, 2015 at 10:02 PM Congratulations, Jan! I knew this would be a winner! :) Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:38 AM Thanks so much Sandra for all your support:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May March 10, 2015 at 9:27 PM lol..congrats on a fine win Jan.. Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:37 AM Thanks so much Joseph I am doubly made up now:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton March 10, 2015 at 8:42 PM novel approach Jan lovely poem congrats on 1st place hugs Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:37 AM WOW thanks so much Shadow I am simply on a high now!!! Hugs Jan - may treat myself to a box of chox now lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 10, 2015 at 7:11 PM Grats on this being the poem of the day :) :) Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:35 AM Thanks so much Cas I was delighted to get the accolade of poem of the day:-) Hugs Jan xx

Old Buck March 10, 2015 at 6:25 PM I thoroughly enjoyed your: Chocoholics - Lament. I have several friends that would agree. Thanks for sharing those thoughts. oldbuck Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 5:34 AM Thanks so much Ray:-) Hugs Jan xx

Zakhe Michael Mcunu March 10, 2015 at 5:08 PM Well penned Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 5:12 PM Thanks so much for dropping by Zache:-) Hugs Jan xx

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