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I Love the Moon

I sing, I sing with a scarless moon
I fear, I fear this will end too soon
I cry, I cry with blood-tinged tears
And now, and now we shall face our fears
I feel, I feel the shadows of darkness
Surround, surround to all our dislikings
Destroy, destroy all the kindness
Repair, repair to all of our sorrows
Whisper, to whisper Heart to heart
Until only Death can rip our dreams apart.....

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John Freeman

February 10, 2010 at 11:37 AM

Priscilla, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses

James Fraser

February 8, 2010 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 8, 2010 at 10:13 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Priscilla. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

February 8, 2010 at 6:07 AM

Many congrats on your fine featured piece. Rgds Janette

Jay Loveless

December 15, 2009 at 9:14 AM

This is beautiful, i truly love it, it somehow touches me again to my Cherokee ancestry. xo Rain

Johneta Ohler

September 17, 2009 at 3:55 PM

wow... that was amazing.. i <3ed it... =].. keep up the good writing

Debbie Guzzi

September 15, 2009 at 4:32 PM

forelorn.. a retorte...I sing, I sing to the sky/I fear, I fear nothing...not I/I cry, I cry for rare beauty/ And now, and now I know surety/I feel, I feel the shadows play/Surround, surround the harsh day/Destroy, destroy all pain/Repair, repair those who're vain/Whisper, whisper life to life/ Until we see gifts and not strive Light & Love