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I Love the Moon

I sing, I sing with a scarless moon I fear, I fear this will end too soon I cry, I cry with blood-tinged tears And now, and now we shall face our fears I feel, I feel the shadows of darkness Surround, surround to all our dislikings Destroy, destroy all the kindness Repair, repair to all of our sorrows Whisper, to whisper Heart to heart Until only Death can rip our dreams apart.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
Priscilla, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Priscilla. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:07:00 AM
Many congrats on your fine featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/15/2009 9:14:00 AM
This is beautiful, i truly love it, it somehow touches me again to my Cherokee ancestry. xo Rain
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Date: 9/17/2009 3:55:00 PM
wow... that was amazing.. i <3ed it... =].. keep up the good writing
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Date: 9/15/2009 4:32:00 PM
forelorn.. a retorte...I sing, I sing to the sky/I fear, I fear nothing...not I/I cry, I cry for rare beauty/ And now, and now I know surety/I feel, I feel the shadows play/Surround, surround the harsh day/Destroy, destroy all pain/Repair, repair those who're vain/Whisper, whisper life to life/ Until we see gifts and not strive Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2009 10:33:00 PM
intense; shouting verse -demanding, with a true poets passion.....o
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Date: 9/4/2009 1:45:00 PM
Very Nice, I love lyrical poetry...shows strong emotion MoonBee
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Date: 9/4/2009 1:39:00 PM
Nicely written verse. Sara
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Date: 9/4/2009 12:41:00 PM
Excellent verse Priscilla, beautifully written. A warm welcome to the Soup>>James
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