Jan Allison Poet Acrostic

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I Love Candy Mia

I crave sticky butter mint balls

Liquorice allsorts from the candy stalls
Orange smarties,  my  favourite treat
Violet crumbles I just love to eat
English toffees for me to masticate

Chocolate drops make me salivate
Aniseed balls would paint my tongue red
Nougat or should I choose fruit gums instead
Dime bars and snickers too much temptation
Yikes! my waistline spread’s caused aggravation!





Message In An Acrostic 2 Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

09/07/21

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Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2021 at 10:45 AM Yes, I remember this one. SO CUTE. Congrats, JAn.

Paula Goldsmith September 18, 2021 at 9:20 AM Congratulations on your win. What a fun/creative write. Love your write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............

Mike Gentile September 18, 2021 at 4:50 AM Back with congrats as well for your placement Jan!! Happy Saturday!

Sean Kibble September 17, 2021 at 4:15 PM Nice write, we don't always get the treats that we desire. Congrats

Sam Kauffman September 17, 2021 at 11:07 AM Masterfully done Jan along with being a sweet treat! Congratulations on your win! Jan Allison September 17, 2021 at 1:48 PM It was such fun to write!:-) Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy September 17, 2021 at 7:01 AM Jan, a huge congrats on your win with this clever, skillfully written piece! Janice Jan Allison September 17, 2021 at 1:47 PM Thanks so much Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin September 16, 2021 at 11:02 PM Wow!congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Both messages, the obvious and "hidden" are expressed in your awesome poetic style. Even the photo is delightful. God bless you. Jan Allison September 17, 2021 at 1:47 PM Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues September 16, 2021 at 8:07 PM My waistline was getting bigger with this read...lol! What a delicious poem...drop the mike "but I am on a strict diet." Congratulations, Jan, on your 2nd place win! Jan Allison September 17, 2021 at 1:46 PM Thanks for the contest, it was such fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Natasha L Scragg September 9, 2021 at 11:05 AM Very clever. And very fun! Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:33 PM Thanks natasha:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman September 8, 2021 at 9:27 PM Just reading this gem, caused my waistline aggravation. So why am i smiling, cause i just love the poetry. Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:33 PM aww your comments boost my spirits, thanks Harry:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie September 8, 2021 at 5:52 PM Hello Jan ... the bottom photo grabbed my attention. A case of; what passes the lips goes straight to the hips - thank you Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:33 PM thanks Lindsay:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2021 at 3:18 PM haha, GREAT secret message. I think yours should be a WIN! Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:32 PM I hope she likes it :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper September 8, 2021 at 3:10 PM I love candy too... :) great entry Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:31 PM me too lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile September 8, 2021 at 9:41 AM Great entry Jan, love the message! That's my problem too!!! Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:31 PM thanks Mike, got to say ive never been a diet in my life:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. September 8, 2021 at 6:22 AM Wow! Jan, You did a great job with the contest challenge. You made it look so easy; I know that it wasn't. I love chocolate too. Diets usually don't work.The message within worked well with your acrostic. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:29 PM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Radice September 8, 2021 at 2:59 AM Now THAT is the pick from the mix...Sweet :) Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:29 PM thanks Gary:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly September 7, 2021 at 10:24 PM This is full of temptation, I love them all, unfortunately...Delice Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:27 PM thanks delice:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins September 7, 2021 at 8:07 PM From the poem, you could've fooled me! Fantastic job, Jan. I guess I should just withdraw my entry! LOL Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:04 PM Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven September 7, 2021 at 5:16 PM A bloody beauty Jan. Really impressed that you managed to seamlessly place masticate into a poem. Impressed Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 4:03 PM Oh i couldnt resist using the word lol I think its the second time i've managed to get masticate in a poem - I wrote one called she masticates three times a day lol:-) hugs jan xx

Simon Hamill September 7, 2021 at 4:29 PM Hi Jan. You had me with the liquorice all-sorts.what a tasty poem. Take care.simon:):) Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 3:58 PM ooh I adore liquorice allsorts too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emilia James September 7, 2021 at 2:23 PM The temptation of those sweet delights would be too much for me. The diet can start again another day lol. Emilia : ) Jan Allison September 7, 2021 at 2:27 PM lol Emilia:-) pure fiction for me never been on a diet x

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Tom Cunningham September 7, 2021 at 1:37 PM Lol I hate diets Jan, but when offered those tasty treats I can't say no. Good luck in the contest Tom Jan Allison September 7, 2021 at 1:46 PM i've never been on a diet in my life lol:-) hugs jan xx