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I crave sticky butter mint balls Liquorice allsorts from the candy stalls Orange smarties, my favourite treat Violet crumbles I just love to eat English toffees for me to masticate Chocolate drops make me salivate Aniseed balls would paint my tongue red Nougat or should I choose fruit gums instead Dime bars and snickers too much temptation Yikes! my waistline spread’s caused aggravation! Message In An Acrostic 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues 09/07/21

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2021 10:45:00 AM

Yes, I remember this one. SO CUTE. Congrats, JAn.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/18/2021 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun/creative write. Love your write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/18/2021 4:50:00 AM

Back with congrats as well for your placement Jan!! Happy Saturday!

Sean Kibble

Date: 9/17/2021 4:15:00 PM

Nice write, we don't always get the treats that we desire. Congrats

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/17/2021 11:07:00 AM

Masterfully done Jan along with being a sweet treat! Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2021 1:48:00 PM

It was such fun to write!:-) Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/17/2021 7:01:00 AM

Jan, a huge congrats on your win with this clever, skillfully written piece! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2021 1:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/16/2021 11:02:00 PM

Wow!congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Both messages, the obvious and "hidden" are expressed in your awesome poetic style. Even the photo is delightful. God bless you.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2021 1:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/16/2021 8:07:00 PM

My waistline was getting bigger with this read...lol! What a delicious poem...drop the mike "but I am on a strict diet." Congratulations, Jan, on your 2nd place win!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2021 1:46:00 PM

Thanks for the contest, it was such fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Natasha L Scragg

Date: 9/9/2021 11:05:00 AM

Very clever. And very fun!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:33:00 PM

Thanks natasha:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/8/2021 9:27:00 PM

Just reading this gem, caused my waistline aggravation. So why am i smiling, cause i just love the poetry.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:33:00 PM

aww your comments boost my spirits, thanks Harry:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/8/2021 5:52:00 PM

Hello Jan ... the bottom photo grabbed my attention. A case of; what passes the lips goes straight to the hips - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:33:00 PM

thanks Lindsay:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2021 3:18:00 PM

haha, GREAT secret message. I think yours should be a WIN!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:32:00 PM

I hope she likes it :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/8/2021 3:10:00 PM

I love candy too... :) great entry

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:31:00 PM

me too lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/8/2021 9:41:00 AM

Great entry Jan, love the message! That's my problem too!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:31:00 PM

thanks Mike, got to say ive never been a diet in my life:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/8/2021 6:22:00 AM

Wow! Jan, You did a great job with the contest challenge. You made it look so easy; I know that it wasn't. I love chocolate too. Diets usually don't work.The message within worked well with your acrostic. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Radice

Date: 9/8/2021 2:59:00 AM

Now THAT is the pick from the mix...Sweet :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:29:00 PM

thanks Gary:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/7/2021 10:24:00 PM

This is full of temptation, I love them all, unfortunately...Delice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:27:00 PM

thanks delice:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/7/2021 8:07:00 PM

From the poem, you could've fooled me! Fantastic job, Jan. I guess I should just withdraw my entry! LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/7/2021 5:16:00 PM

A bloody beauty Jan. Really impressed that you managed to seamlessly place masticate into a poem. Impressed

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 4:03:00 PM

Oh i couldnt resist using the word lol I think its the second time i've managed to get masticate in a poem - I wrote one called she masticates three times a day lol:-) hugs jan xx

Simon Hamill

Date: 9/7/2021 4:29:00 PM

Hi Jan. You had me with the liquorice all-sorts.what a tasty poem. Take care.simon:):)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2021 3:58:00 PM

ooh I adore liquorice allsorts too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Emilia James

Date: 9/7/2021 2:23:00 PM

The temptation of those sweet delights would be too much for me. The diet can start again another day lol. Emilia : )

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2021 2:27:00 PM

lol Emilia:-) pure fiction for me never been on a diet x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/7/2021 2:04:00 PM

WOW! I don’t think you have the slightest idea just what an amazing poet you are. You just get better & better. Everyone should add this magical piece to their faves like I will. Just want people to know my ebook is for free on Amazon today. I’m not sure if it’s still part of the promotion one more day tomorrow. FREE GRAB IT https://www.amazon.com/Fifty-Three-Collection-Soul-Inspiring-Anthology-ebook/dp/B09BZP1K7B/ref=tmm_kin_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=&sr=

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2021 2:27:00 PM

Armand, get a blog done now advertising your book xx love you my sweet friend and miss you Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/7/2021 1:37:00 PM

Lol I hate diets Jan, but when offered those tasty treats I can't say no. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2021 1:46:00 PM

i've never been on a diet in my life lol:-) hugs jan xx