I Love Blackberries

Blackberries in my hot pie topped with ice cream,
           
a bowl makes my mouth beam.
Blackberry wine,
                                                           
is so very divine.
Blackberries covered in cottage cheese,
                         
this dish will bring me to my knees.
Blackberries~raspberries~strawberries in a dish,
             
makes me want to make a big wish.
Blackberry ice cream topped with blackberries,
               
is better than with cherries.
Blackberry syrup with blackberries on french toast, 
       
is the best from coast to coast.
Guess you have figured it out,
                                       
I love Blackberries without any doubt.
Date Written:7/30/2022
Note: I do not drink. I needed a rhyme with divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Meadows Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 4:17 AM
They sound tasty! A good poem. Well done.
Ligon Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Mmm, makes me hungry for some delicious blackberries. You gave some great examples of ways to use them.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this Blackberry write. They are good in so many different ways. I love them. Now hungry for some wonderful berries. Have a blessed day................
Ashley Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 7:22 PM
Such a scrumptious poem, Paula! Delectable imagery tempts the tastebuds. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my write. Now it is time to eat some wonderful berries. Have a blessed day................
Kerr Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 3:54 PM
Paula, this work oozes real charm and creativity. Imagination too. Thanks for your comment on Nowhere In Sight. Howard
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like my Blackberries write. Have a blessed day................
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:39 PM
I think you will get a gold star for this one. Just wait till he sees MINE. I am NOT crazy for this berry
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Thanks for your note. You have a gold star for me??? I will take it. Hahaha... I love Blackberries~raspberries~strawberries raw or cooked. Have a blessed day................
Foster Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Oh... YUM... Yum... yum... Well done. Ann
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Happy Tuesday and Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun/cute "Blackberries" write. Have a very blessed day...................
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 12:29 PM
Beautiful poem Paula--sweet as blackberries. Best to you.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Happy Sunday and Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Blackberries" write. Have a very blessed day/week................
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Paula !! Your blackberries dessert is scrumptious to think about on this lovely morning, and as a result, I am craving after the nectar. Happy Weekend!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Happy Sunday and Thanks for your note. Glad you like this blackberry dishes/write. It is morning how about "Blackberry syrup with blackberries on french toast???" Have a blessed day/week................ 
Gasun Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:36 AM
You've written a very fantastic and delicious poem on blackberries my dear friend Paula. You made me want to eat too while enjoying the read. Your love of blackberries is wonderfully and creatively expressed. Thanks a lot for sharing. Good luck and best wishes in the contest. God bless you always. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Happy Sunday!!! Thanks for your note and for your good luck/best wishes. Glad you like this delicious  blackberry write. I love Blackberries~raspberries~strawberries. Have a blessed day/week................ 
Gentile Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 4:45 AM
I'll drink the wine for you Paula !! Your blackberry confection is delicious to read this fine morning and now I am yearning for the syrup! Happy Sunday!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Happy Sunday and Thanks for your note. Glad you like this blackberry write. It is morning so have some "Blackberry syrup with blackberries on french toast." Tonight have a glass of "Blackberry wine" for me. Have a blessed day/week................
Horsman Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Wonderful recipe, Paula, of blackberries and poetry.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:39 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like these blackberry recipes/write. Have a blessed day/week................
Rose  Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 6:02 PM
it all sounds so very tasty, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this tasty write. Have a blessed day/week................
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