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Premiere Contest WinnerI Love All the Seasons

Oh, blessed Spring I have been waiting for you it seems forever, Let me throw off this winter coat and put on my raincoat and galoshes; I love your blue skies and even rain showers that clean the earth, Delightful spring flowers are sprouting, the violets and tulips are lovely; Everything is awakening, baby birds are chirping and baby squirrels scampering. Oh, beautiful Summer, I have planted seeds in my rainbow garden, I have my sandals, sundresses in pretty colors and picnic basket ready; On forest hikes I will go, to the breezy beach and leisurely walks in the park, When days are sun-drenched hot, I will find a shade tree to rest and ponder; I love even your thunderstorms and showers that make the earth flourish and grow. Oh, Autumn I adore your changing foliage, the falling leaves and coolness, A crackling fireplace on a breezy fall evening, dreams of pumpkin pie; Halloween and all the kids, Thanksgiving turkey with stuffing and apple cider, After, we will rake the multi-colored leaves, crisp and tattered, the smell divine; Everything is turning, changing, soon animals and me will be hibernating in warmth. Oh, Winter my beloved, I love you the most of all, we are linked in spirit, I was born in a winter snowstorm, it was bitter cold, the day pure white with snow; Your brisk cold breath is so frosty, your delicate lacy snowflakes are a delight, Christmas trees and Christmas Day, snowmen and gingerbread men so cheerful; Yes, I know you have a temper and can get quite gusty and nippy, and ice-kissed. ______________________________ April 4, 2016 Poetry/Verse/I Love All The Seasons Copyright Protected, ID 16-774-662-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem Written April 2016 sponsor, Laura Loo First Place _________________________ Submitted to the contest, Seasons Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton Sixth Place
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Inman Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:00 PM
Where I live we have very distinct seasons, the season of White Camellias (Winter),the season of the Pink Trumpet Flowers (Spring), the season of Red Crepe Myrtles (Summer), and the season of Yellow Butterfly Cassia (Fall). Lol. Sometimes the falling blossoms remind me of snow. A lovely write BW.
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:52 PM
James, nice to hear from you. Thanks for visiting my poem. Well here the snow has melted now we have tons of rain.
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your wonderful Trophy First Place win for this amazingly beautiful poem! 7 Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on this very descriptive warm write, Constance. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Thanks Eve.
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:01 PM
made me smile Constance as we both submitted seasons poems with the same image:-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:54 PM
Thanks Jan. I guess we have good taste.
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations BW, moving on up...well done
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thanks Charlie.
Scars Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Broken Wings, I don't know where to start lady...just gorgeous in your pen...beautifully written with remarkable flow, I am always astounded...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest...:)-luloo
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Laura thanks so much for my placement. I love your contests.
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April 10, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Broken, Congrats in "Shadow Hamilton's Season, Contest." ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats !
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Congrats BO to win. I also love all seasons each having its own attraction. Love. Anisha
La France Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Anisha, thanks for the congrats and the love !
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Written by one who has experienced them all. Lovely writing. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Joyce, thanks for the lovely and the love !
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Jan thanks for the congrats and the hugs !!
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 3:08 PM
WOW Constance the imagery is amazing and yes we did use the same pic - great minds think alike:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Jan, thanks for the wow and amazing, yep great minds that is exactly what I thought ~
Underwood Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Such a beautiful write, all seasons are great in their own unique ways, enjoyed reading this
La France Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:11 AM
Gail, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, you are so right all seasons have something special to offer !
Horne Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 12:04 PM
love this - yes, i think winter is probably my favourite too.
La France Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Jack, thanks for visiting, I do love winter !!
Inman Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Wonderful descriptive write BW.
La France Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:09 AM
James, thanks for visiting and the wonderful !
Mark Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:28 AM
first stanza 3rd line (that ! ..not than) first stanza 4th line , perhaps end the line with " the tulips ARE lovely ? 3rd stanza 2nd line " lets have some pumpkin pie" feels weak, and changes the direction, try " and dreams of pumpkin pie" to keep the dreamy nature of the write.. third stanza 3rd line ( comma after "After") .... once these are looked at you may have a tidier write that befits a S.H contest
Mark Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for not thinking I was being picky, it runs smooth now , good luck...
La France Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thank you for your input.
Dalei Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Brilliant presentation. It is truly a outstanding piece. Well penned....hugs
La France Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:08 AM
MD, thanks you for the brilliant and outstanding, I love those words and the hugs !!!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 3:24 AM
How lovely Broken... a seven for this ..best wishes ..
La France Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 2:07 AM
Upma, thanks for the lovely and the 7 ~
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