I Looked Off

I looked off
Into great distance…
Little things
No longer distinguishable-
Those subtle differences
I could never name
Anyway,
Could never paint,
Stubbornly refusing
The prime of my colors,
Shapes and strokes
Of my pithy brush-
My mind a sieve
Of contours
And dripping questions
Muddied
In rivers of endless
Flowing debate…

It is here
At great distance,
Where topics come together
In a somewhat-blur,
Clearer for lack of
Definition,
Sort of like
Closing one's eyes to see more…
Or one's ears
To feel vibration
Of deception,
And sense true
Hearing inside,
And sound an honest
But dull imitator-
The real mystery of
Resonance-atmosphere
One it will never give up-
A jittering tease
Of provocative molecules…

It is here in distance
I come to retrieve myself-
That stick I long tossed
a time ago-
The reminder I placed
In a bottle
And pitched to sea
Way back when,
Now washed ashore
Seal intact-
Ink fresh as ever-
The near twinkle of glass
The same twinkle I sent
On its way…

It is here
In distance
That I find you near-
The macro
Out of the micro,
The world-speck,
Grown universal-
Sails
Not pointed up
Nor down
Nor out
But in-
To the here vastness,
The seal of self broken,
To be read fresh
Back from the dark of searching,
In new light
The star uncovered
I always had
And needed blinding to see…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/9/2016 12:06:00 PM
There is a vastness within that we have yet to explore, where questions are answered in a clear concept of the directional path we need to explore. I love the metaphoric logic in the way you express your insight in this amazing piece Joe. 7 ; )
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/9/2016 3:20:00 PM
Hi Connie; very beautifully said--lots of wisdom in your comment, showing you are spiritually aware and seeking the infinite that is our essence. Nothing without did not first start within. The sea, the sky, the weather, the universe--you name it. And all of what is yet to come, is already a spirit-plan of eternal, infinite proportions, never still. The living word. No need for anything ever to be repeated, one glory after another. Or Hell, if this is the direction humanity wills, consciously and unconsciously. Free Will means, we create all, and not simply making choices from established lists and variables. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement, for giving me the opportunity to further explain some reasoning behind this work. Blessings my friend!
Date: 10/8/2016 7:19:00 PM
Your haunting words are heartfelt and brilliant!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/9/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lyva; I deeply appreciate your positive encouragement. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 10/8/2016 7:20:00 AM
Your brushstrokes are anything but pithy... 'Closing one's eyes to see more'… ah yes, indifference. We see what we want to see, until our eyes are finally opened to certain realities, titanic finish!
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Date: 10/8/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paloma; really enjoyed your lovely comment. Have a beautiful day!!
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