Paula Goldsmith Poet Pantoum

I Look Into the Night Sky

I look into the night sky

Seeing colors everywhere.

The loud sounds make my dog cry

Smells and sounds fill the night  air.

 



Seeing colors everywhere

My heart jumps for all this joy.

Smells and sounds fill the night air

Each year just like a new toy.

 



My heart jumps for all this joy

The loud sounds make my dog cry.

Each year just like a new toy

I look into the night sky.

 


Date Written:12/30/2020
3 Place
Fireworks Contest Judged: 2/4/2021 Sponsored by: Eve Roper
7 Syllable Count  
Rhyming Pantoum

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Eve Roper February 5, 2021 at 11:58 PM Thank you for participating and winning in the Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Paula. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2021 at 11:58 AM Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Glad you like this one. Joy/blessings going your way............

Kim Rodrigues February 4, 2021 at 1:54 PM The contrast...joy for you, not so much for the sweet pup! Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2021 at 11:57 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Joy/blessings going your way............

Caren Krutsinger January 9, 2021 at 2:53 PM I think it strange how loud fireworks are, looking so beautiful but causing dirt in dogs and veterans with PTSD. Your metaphoric write delights me. Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2021 at 1:34 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, they are loud. I wonder if they could make them quieter???? I love the pretty colors. Joy/blessings going your way............

Constance La France January 1, 2021 at 4:50 AM Paula, enjoyed your write, I love the colors but hate the loud sounds, imagine if they were silent, how amazing that would be, well done _Constance Paula Goldsmith January 1, 2021 at 7:35 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, your are so right. Just the pretty colors without the loud sounds would be much better. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings.......................

Arturo Michael December 30, 2020 at 11:36 AM Well done...Nice play with lines...All the best to you in 2021. Paula Goldsmith December 31, 2020 at 12:15 PM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings.......................