I Long To Be

Darkness uncovered dusty white sheets pushed aside tweets spilled out break the silence as I'm perched inside Oh how I long to be . . . that bird outside your window singing there for all to see sweet songs of freedom floating in angelic air a rich blaze of blue lasting liberation caressing and undressing the insides of you I long to be . . . drifting in your winds feeling distant paradise in every simple kiss of your loving sun but here I remain encaged, your dawn momentarily shining down onto these painfully painted rails yesterday's imagination molts and the seeds of life lay lost at the bottom of discontent
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Murray Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Whenever I read your poems, I know romance is not dead Tim.
Ricci Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Good Morning Tim - I have no words other than to say this is beautiful and very much poetry. All is well within your entry words and execution. Well done
Vaso Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 8:28 PM
Came back to read again!Very beautiful, really liked that second verse. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Swept up to be scattered spent, delicious poetry.
Downing  Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:31 AM
A touch of sadness but oh so so beautiful, Tim! "I long to be . . . drifting in your winds feeling distant paradise in every simple kiss of your loving sun"....I love it!
Vaso Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Not only did I love this poem, it make me smile to read the romance, even with the twinge of sadness.
Curtis Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Girls just don't have a chance do they Timmy lol
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Such longing in your lines tim, I long to be as good as you for writing this style of poem! Love the alliteration adding to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
Sands Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 11:12 AM
A beautifully written poem full of longing. Well done Tim. Have a nice day :)
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