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Poetry/Rhyme/I Live In A Fantasy World
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-130-06
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 06, 2024
For the International Contest, You Live In a Fantasy World
Sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 12/11/2024

FIRST PLACE

 

I am a tiny fairy, with a chatty friend dragonfly; our garden is lovely and airy, my wings are broken, I sigh. Dragon says that I am pretty, he hums when my world is scary; we are happy though itty-bitty, in flower sanctuary.

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Date: 12/13/2024 10:55:00 AM
So perfect! It's a beautiful painting Eve made and a lovely verse to go with it! Xo
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Date: 12/13/2024 12:35:00 PM
Crystol, thank you so much for the compliment ~
Date: 12/13/2024 5:54:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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Date: 12/13/2024 12:35:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the complimet and congratulations ~
Date: 12/13/2024 4:32:00 AM
- Constance, a beautiful poem for Eve's painting :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Date: 12/13/2024 12:36:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 12/12/2024 11:09:00 AM
Just lovely, Constance! I love the element of friendship! Congratulations on your win! Advent blessings of light!
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:45:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, blessings
Date: 12/12/2024 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/lovely write. Love your line, "Dragon says that I am pretty," Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:45:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 12/6/2024 7:57:00 PM
I enjoyed this. I think the "dragon says that I am pretty" line is perfectly placed in the poem.
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:40:00 PM
Rob, thank you for the comment, and compliment, happy you enjoyed, blessings Constance
Date: 12/6/2024 6:52:00 PM
A good poem which is direct enough for enjoyment by all ages. I like the animal descriptions. Fairy tales never get old.
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Date: 12/6/2024 10:40:00 PM
Hilda, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, love Constance

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