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Poetry/Rhyme/I Live In A Fantasy World
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-130-06
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 06, 2024
For the International Contest, You Live In a Fantasy World
Sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 12/11/2024

FIRST PLACE

 

I Live In A Fantasy World

 
I am a tiny fairy, with a chatty friend dragonfly; our garden is lovely and airy, my wings are broken, I sigh. Dragon says that I am pretty, he hums when my world is scary; we are happy though itty-bitty, in flower sanctuary.
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Woods Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 10:55 AM
So perfect! It's a beautiful painting Eve made and a lovely verse to go with it! Xo
La France Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:35 PM
Crystol, thank you so much for the compliment ~
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
La France Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:35 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the complimet and congratulations ~
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 4:32 AM
- Constance, a beautiful poem for Eve's painting :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs
La France Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~
Kauffman Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Just lovely, Constance! I love the element of friendship! Congratulations on your win! Advent blessings of light!
La France Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your cute/lovely write. Love your line, "Dragon says that I am pretty," Have a wonderful day writing away..............
La France Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings
Carmack Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 7:57 PM
I enjoyed this. I think the "dragon says that I am pretty" line is perfectly placed in the poem.
La France Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Rob, thank you for the comment, and compliment, happy you enjoyed, blessings Constance
Greenhough Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 6:52 PM
A good poem which is direct enough for enjoyment by all ages. I like the animal descriptions. Fairy tales never get old.
La France Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Hilda, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, love Constance
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