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I Let It Slip Away

I let it slip away, That silver fish I caught, For life-freedom, it sought On that Summer Friday, I let it slip away, That lovely fish I caught, For it struggled distraught, Gazing in sad dismay, I let it slip away, That fleshy fish I caught, For with such strength it fought, I could not make it stay, I let it slip away, That shining fish I caught, For my line was pulled taut And about to give way, I let it slip away, My feet slipped, I was caught And fell into that spot - Fishing is not child's play.
26th April 2023 For John Lawless' "I let it slip away" contest

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Date: 4/28/2023 7:40:00 AM
Wow! Jo, This is a good write for the contest. You executed the form and rhymes. It had good content and imagery as well. Your choice of words caused the poem to come alive. I could just imagine the funny scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:53:00 AM
Simply awesome. I enjoyed it much ! The subject is cleverly handled . All the best Joanna...
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:12:00 AM
Clever writing with a hint of fun.
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:06:00 PM
no it is not, its hard work, but it can be so rewarding and fun, :)
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Date: 4/27/2023 4:10:00 PM
oh this is so cute and clever. I hope i can think of something for this contest!!!
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Date: 4/27/2023 1:45:00 PM
A very fun write Jo. Whether metaphoric or literal, it is so clever with falling into "that spot". Best wishes! :)
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Date: 4/27/2023 12:29:00 PM
Great penning Joanna, such a nice refrain making it so expressive and enlightening. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 4/27/2023 11:17:00 AM
O those wily fish Jo - the one that got away that you always remember! Love the ha-ha at the end. Best wishes for the contest and for catching another fish! Blessings!
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