Get Your Premium Membership

I Left My Purse on the Chopper

It is day number twenty-one. I've been awake for a week, I think. The ride in the chopper was fun... But my hair never slept a wink! I love how the Universe speaks. The tap on the shoulder, a whisper From angels who know time has ceased Asleep, til her prince just kissed her! A tragic event - I might die But i woke up and everyone smiled. The husband and kids by my side, The Universe bearing a child. The Doctors and Nurses from God, Who helped me get back on the hopper, Discharged me with twenty prescriptions, But I left my purse on the chopper!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/24/2009 11:17:00 AM
Very clever write here, Karen. Its been a very long time since you've posted here at the Soup!! Hope you return with more great writes and Happy Holidays to you and your family!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2009 10:51:00 AM
Having had a heart atack in 2004, I can feel your words... except for leaving my purse on the chopper, that is. I left it in the ambulance and my wife had to run it down for me. lol Another good un! Thanks... <><
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2009 12:22:00 AM
Excellent and nice flow...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 3/5/2009 3:48:00 PM
hope your alright. i was just getting to knw you. john
Login to Reply
Date: 1/31/2009 7:12:00 PM
Karen, I don't know whether to laugh or say, "Oh, dear Lord, are you alright??" I guess, both. Is this a true story? Do tell. Loved this bit of imaginative writing if it's not true. Blessings, Donna G.
Login to Reply