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I Know You Think You'Re Right

Do you know what it feels like to have your heart ripped from your chest here is this beautiful baby, you think you've done all you can to protect What happens the day you understand it is all your wrong doings You say you'd give your life for him; when all along you slowly were, only to have the reverse The damage that you've done may never repair but you will try your hardest because you can't give up You were put here for this purpose; your two hearts used to beat as one then you wake up one day and bamn, lifes gone, my poor innocent son So pick youself up and dust yourself off;there is no room for failure, not this time They're banking on your mess up, she has to do it soon She's gone on too long, it's her routine you have a smile on your face, nobody but you can understand You can knock me down a million times but I will NEVER give up It is not an option for you They need me, I think I need them more I'll show you, I promise, I'll do better And she will, she has to, or she'll die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/24/2015 6:54:00 AM
Jessie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Jessie - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/14/2015 8:50:00 PM
Epically awesome. I know how it feels. The key word is "Never give up." Jessie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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