I Know the Land Where the Lemon-Tree Flowers

I know the land where the lemon- tree flowers,

I have seen it's pretty blooms

And it has the fresh clean scent of you,

I've seen the pretty lemon citric fruit,

I love it's taste and its flavour

In the same way that I love the taste of you,

You are the taste that I choose to savour,

While comparing the prettiness and the shape of you.

I notice the lemon

Has the same smooth and shapely aspects glowing as you do,

The same fine texture

I really want to make you bloom,

Like the lemon-trees do,

In all their pretty adornment

Leaving me bamboozled,

By your fresh and zestful way

Who knew it would be lemons and you I crave,

We can share a pretty picnic

Under the lemon trees

In a land that is so pretty

Where I can stare so deeply

Into your deep and sumptuous pretty eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Hello Fauxcrofth, this place you described sounds beautiful, I am wondering, where it is. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Wade Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 4:24 PM
The place I created within my mind, maybe a place I remember from a past life. I am humbled that you enjoyed it. Many thanks for reading and appreciating. Have an awesome day too. Faux
Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Hi Fauxcroft, this is such a beautifully romantic and loving piece filled with amazing imagery! So wonderful, my friend, reads like a winner. Love and hugs. Pandita
Wade Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating and for your kind words. Love and light my friend. Faux
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 6:52 PM
ahh, you made it so sensuous! Nicely done.
Wade Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my friend. Faux
Nance Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 9:17 AM
That sure is pretty!
Wade Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Thank you very much. Faux
Man Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:36 AM
I'd like to know the place you beautifully describe.. love and lemons, two of my favorites!!
Wade Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:22 AM
A place of dreams and imagination. Thank you for reading and appreciating. Faux
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:16 AM
- Sounds wonderful, Faux :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wade Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine, much appreciated. Faux
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 3:51 AM
I like the way you compare your love to a lemon; this was unusually smart. A wise poem. Good luck in the contest!
Wade Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating. Faux
Sands Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 12:30 PM
A nice creative poem Faux :)
Wade Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Thank you very much for reading. Faux
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