I Know the Land Where the Lemon-Tree Flowers

I know the land where the lemon- tree flowers,

I have seen it's pretty blooms

And it has the fresh clean scent of you,

I've seen the pretty lemon citric fruit,

I love it's taste and its flavour

In the same way that I love the taste of you,

You are the taste that I choose to savour,

While comparing the prettiness and the shape of you.

I notice the lemon

Has the same smooth and shapely aspects glowing as you do,

The same fine texture

I really want to make you bloom,

Like the lemon-trees do,

In all their pretty adornment

Leaving me bamboozled,

By your fresh and zestful way

Who knew it would be lemons and you I crave,

We can share a pretty picnic

Under the lemon trees

In a land that is so pretty

Where I can stare so deeply

Into your deep and sumptuous pretty eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/7/2018 2:34:00 PM
Hello Fauxcrofth, this place you described sounds beautiful, I am wondering, where it is. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 8/7/2018 4:24:00 PM
The place I created within my mind, maybe a place I remember from a past life. I am humbled that you enjoyed it. Many thanks for reading and appreciating. Have an awesome day too. Faux
Date: 7/15/2018 9:33:00 AM
Hi Fauxcroft, this is such a beautifully romantic and loving piece filled with amazing imagery! So wonderful, my friend, reads like a winner. Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating and for your kind words. Love and light my friend. Faux
Date: 7/13/2018 6:52:00 PM
ahh, you made it so sensuous! Nicely done.
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/14/2018 6:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my friend. Faux
Date: 7/13/2018 9:17:00 AM
That sure is pretty!
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Fauxcroft Wade
Date: 7/13/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you very much. Faux
Date: 7/13/2018 7:36:00 AM
I'd like to know the place you beautifully describe.. love and lemons, two of my favorites!!
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Date: 7/13/2018 10:22:00 AM
A place of dreams and imagination. Thank you for reading and appreciating. Faux
Date: 7/13/2018 5:16:00 AM
- Sounds wonderful, Faux :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine, much appreciated. Faux
Date: 7/13/2018 3:51:00 AM
I like the way you compare your love to a lemon; this was unusually smart. A wise poem. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 7/13/2018 4:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading and appreciating. Faux
Date: 7/12/2018 12:30:00 PM
A nice creative poem Faux :)
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Date: 7/12/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading. Faux
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