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I know of a secret place, where we may imbibe God’s grace after giving love our nod, tiptoeing therein unshod. Let’s cut to chase, cave of heart, is where our quest we should start, invoking bliss magnetism, to ignite mind-body prism. First things first, we must be pure, recognising love’s the cure to all conflicts in our life; futile and needless is strife. If we’re not love enabled, with narrow fears yet tabled, knowing not how to behave, we cannot enter God’s cave. I know of this secret place, where we see God face to face; bliss nectar soul may partake, once lower mind we forsake. 23-May-2023 This or That, Vol 18 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 6/11/2023 5:04:00 PM
Simply an amazing poem and form, Seeker:-) You did the theme justice. Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/11/2023 6:27:00 PM
Praise from Caesar! Thank you, dear Edward, for hosting and for my placement. :)
Date: 5/23/2023 6:55:00 AM
You are blessed with wisdom, my friend. Your poem is full of it. A FAV for my list. All should read are a blessing they may miss. Thanks for sharing, Bill A poet friend in Texas. This should be a POTD!
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Date: 5/23/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, dear Bill :) so delighted you enjoyed, God bless

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