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I Knew You From a Distant Dream

I knew you from a distant dream The sweet streams cry out The dumb rocks perspire with dew My heart flutters in your comely grace You're more beautiful than the flower And more sweeter than the nectar's burst Your scent lingers like the wild breeze Your hair escapes thro' the sad light The blue moon dies on your lips. Petal threads blew unannounced It seems like a kiss has touched you It seems like the fading light And those wide brown lips trembles Thro' the twilight songs of sweet lyres Your words hold a certain sweetness But my tongue is dumb as the rocks Dumb to the long drawn kiss of your eyes To but whisper a simple word A swooning word of love Before the morning light may spring Before your hastening feet retreats Down the dusty street Where the fragrance shoots. I knew you from a distant dream The strangled notes of the sea It died, then gave whisper to your name The stars a laurel to your head Your scarf on the lantern seas My heart is clasped against yours And then it beats soberingly fast And then it breathes.... slowly With love's tenderness. I knew you from a distant dream The night bled its frost that day The popular shops shut their eyes And the busy streets went to sleep I've sank my eyes upon you As a roving light humanly divine Sank upon the half black earth. I want you like the round plump grapes That wavers in winters seasonal bloom When the stars would rise and fall On the quivered slender hues Parked lightly on the bench. There's a flame that does exist It burns sweetly upon my dreams There's a pulsating joy you draw From the roots of my sorrowing heart But I in this cold wide earth clung To your cinnamon lips And in your pleasant arms Wide awake Only to die again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/18/2014 12:17:00 AM
I absolutely respect your honest harmony of joy and sorrow produced by your Muse Muhhamed. You truly create new angles on classic sentiments, and they are very fresh and intelligent. I enjoyed internalizing this masterful poetry because the experience is so identifiable. Great work, and a FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:06:00 PM
you leave me almost broken yet enticed, mus.. beautiful masterpiece!.. huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/7/2014 4:08:00 PM
stay with us.. you inspire!
Date: 6/3/2014 7:32:00 PM
Great and vivid imagery in this piece! Well done! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Matthew. I hope you are keeping well.
Date: 5/30/2014 8:07:00 AM
- Sad to hear dear friend, Mustapha - As you've probably noticed I'm the only active writing here from Norway ....... My English skills are old and bad .... but I do the best I can. - Yes, there are many poems .... I "drown" in the poem .... "little me" - with my little "kitchen table poems" - You are an accomplished poet - and you're like "important" that all others - I will not say goodbye!! - I wish you a beautiful weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:01:00 AM
It has been a wonderful journey for me here and who knew it would have been such a magical experience sharing and perusing here. Don't you ever doubt your gift for one minute my dear....remember that always. I will not say goodbye either because I will always stop by to read and support your gifted thoughts. Hugs from Trinidad.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 7:59:00 AM
Hey dear Anne Lise! I would try to visit from time to time and read and encourage the ones who have always been a source of encouragement and support to my poetry since I have started writing here at the Soup.
Date: 5/28/2014 6:03:00 PM
Thank-you for your recent comment. This work expresses a longing for something wonderful. I find my own dreams of longing funny in that the good stuff is made to appear better and better. Passion always did funny things to my sense of reality. You are a true poet scholar. Keep it up, sir!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:15:00 AM
Hey thanks a lot Duke for your encouraging review on my poem. Keep up the good work also. : )
Date: 5/26/2014 10:03:00 PM
oh my gosh, this is about as romantic as it can get around here. WHAT a poem, Mustapha. Your English and imagery are astounding!!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/30/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Skat. You were the very first to welcome me here at the Soup and thoughtful and kind deed like that shall never go forgotten by me. I love reading your poems Skat, you're a fantastic poetess...keep that light burning my dear. I have few friends left here, not many as you would think and to them I would always be a pillar of support in their continued growth, but my writing days on the Soup has come to an end.
Date: 5/26/2014 7:57:00 PM
Mustapha, I am not as active on the soup as it seems, I keep up with my contest, and a few commenters...... I wish you would not leave. I know you have many who enjoy your words and love. I will keep an eye on your account, in hopes you don't remove your poems... SKAT
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/30/2014 8:09:00 AM
Thank you very much Skat. You were the very first to welcome me here at the Soup and thoughtful and kind deed like that shall never go forgotten by me. I love reading your poems Skat, you're a fantastic poetess...keep that light burning my dear. I have few friends left here, not many as you would think and to them I would always be a pillar of support in their continued growth, but my writing days on the Soup has come to an end.
Date: 5/26/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Mustapha,a really beautiful poem, romantic and sweet. - (Why would you delete your poems?????) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2014 8:10:00 AM
- You give me tears in my eyes : (
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/30/2014 8:02:00 AM
Secondly in preparation to publish my works I decided its about time I take my bow out and focus on a professional career in writing. So as such I saw the need to remove my poems from the Soup. It is a work at hand but gradually they will be removed but from time to time I would stop by and visit your work because I will never forget the encouragement you have left on my poems Anne-Lise.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/30/2014 7:54:00 AM
It has been a great journey here for me Anne Lise. I feel like I don't belong here anymore. In a very large community such as this when you take days sometimes weeks to even compose one poem and your poems are lost in the vast throngs of poems that continually flood through here every day without hardly any read, it makes the effort seems somewhat defeated.
Date: 5/26/2014 10:20:00 AM
Very romantic work..I know that one about whom you wrote was delighted to read it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/30/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Sara, you are always a delight to my page. My mom loves reading your wonderful poems and so do I. You just keep on growing since the first time I read your work and that's what I admire.
Date: 5/25/2014 3:38:00 PM
excellent picture you paint dear friend thumb up smiling
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/26/2014 9:51:00 AM
Hey dear friend....thank you....see you at CS.
Date: 5/23/2014 9:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this beauty again.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Richard for just being you old pal. Such a pleasure to see you on my poem page again.
Date: 5/14/2014 4:43:00 AM
Soft, sensual, and oh so romantic. Your ink is infused with drops of passion.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Monterey. Always appreciate your warm support and encouragement on my literature. I hope you are keeping well.
Date: 5/11/2014 11:18:00 PM
Wow! Such a romantic and passion filled write, so beautifully expressed! I think that you have mastered the art of poetry, my friend!
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:21:00 PM
wow, you certainly know how to touch a heart with your images and poetic mood, mus...this is exttaordinary and so poignant.. love it.. hugggs
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thank you my dear Nette. I hope you are keeping well.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/11/2014 1:21:00 PM
extraordinary
Date: 5/11/2014 11:05:00 AM
Sorry for the typos... Meant to say with:-)
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:03:00 AM
Hi Mustapha, This is an exponentially gifted and exuisite Poem... WOW. Wish I could give it a thousand trophys. Thank you for sharing this weigh us here. Peace, Deborah
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/25/2014 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Deborah for such a kind review. I don't recall meeting you before. Its nice to meet if I haven't. I will be stopping by to read up on your stuff.
Date: 5/11/2014 10:08:00 AM
I am sorry to hear you will be removing your poems. This is sad news. You are a talented poet as is demonstrated by this beauteous piece.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 5/25/2014 5:51:00 PM
I was deciding to do it because of the preparations for publishing the ones that aren't. Thank you Richard, that is so very kind of you to stop by with such an encouraging review my friend.
Date: 5/11/2014 5:29:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I was spellbound from the first line to the very last.... What beauty! What depth of expression. What love! Your Muse must be divine to produce this. Great write!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/17/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thank you dear Eileen! Are you still attending classes? Thanks for the wonderful review on my poem. A pleasure to hear from you.

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