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I Knew That I Had Come Home

A cobbled path winding lazily through a forest of emerald greens, Streaks of sunlight bursting past the canopy of birch wood limbs, An aromatic scent lingering between each wooded mile, Lost in time, I knew that I had come home. A grey-thatched hut with pillars of timber and earthen floor, Stoked hard flames crackling fast and warming the potted hearth, A sweet melodic song from the parted lips of a sylvan lass, Lost in time, I knew that I had come home. Like a pair of lambskin mittens against wintered hands, Like an embrace of angelic wings folded against waiting arms, Like a scented kiss feeding a hungered soul from deep within, Lost in time, I knew that I had come home.

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Date: 10/4/2017 5:25:00 PM
Makes me wanna be home!
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Date: 9/10/2017 9:20:00 PM
I like this ancient lovely write Thomas :) sounds like we share a love for another..."purer" age. Whether it be in the past or the future...I long for that forest too! :)
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 9/10/2017 10:44:00 PM
Thank you Chris. I'd love to find that enchanted forest, emerald green with unicorns and fairies. The Fountain of Youth would be a great find!
Date: 9/8/2017 6:43:00 AM
Oh sweet home. You made me remember my mother's hut in the middle of the compound in Uyough, Adikpo. This is wonderful! Write more.
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 9/10/2017 9:56:00 PM
I'm afraid to ask, but where is Uyough, Adikpo? Thank you for your support. Priscilla is a beautiful name (that was my mother's name).
Date: 9/8/2017 5:51:00 AM
You have such an inimitable write, Thomas. You have a great gift! ;-)
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 9/10/2017 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Teddy, your comment is very generous.
Date: 9/3/2017 7:47:00 PM
Thomas: I'm just an old rhymester and really good stuff like this is usually way over my head but this almost made me cry. It is beautiful. Keep these coming. Thanks for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 9/10/2017 9:53:00 PM
Thank you Old buck for your encouraging words. I'm sure you're capable of writing terrific poetry, and I think you're just too modest.
Date: 8/8/2017 10:01:00 PM
Damn.I like your style in this write. Purely sublime and organically timed.
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 8/10/2017 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Holly for reading my poem and leaving a kind comment. I shall look forward to reading your poetry!
Date: 8/1/2017 8:19:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful, Thomas. What an appealing picture you've painted! Janice
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 8/1/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 8/1/2017 5:47:00 AM
Like a scented kiss feeding a hungered soul from deep within...What a wonderful line!! I put out a poem yesterday called Halo. That line would have been perfect. Not that I'm going to pinch it dont worry. lol I love your perfect poem....Maria
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 8/1/2017 6:11:00 AM
Thank you for your compliment Maria. You really are a favorite poet of mine to read.
Date: 7/31/2017 4:54:00 PM
Wow.. this a good write...
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/31/2017 7:03:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, and thank you for the comment.
Date: 7/30/2017 9:41:00 PM
Where is home, with a grey-thatched hut? It sounds lovely.
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/30/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem, and thanks so much for leaving a comment. I shall enjoy reading your work.
Date: 7/30/2017 2:30:00 PM
Very comforting and assuring, delightful read, thanks for posting this gem Thomas!
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/30/2017 9:36:00 PM
I should be thanking you for your wonderful lyrics, but thank you anyway for your visit and kind comment.
Date: 7/30/2017 10:39:00 AM
Lovely piece Thomas full of great imagery and homely thoughts. Keep spilling the ink! Blessings Gordon
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Thomas Hsi
Date: 7/30/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem, I appreciate your generous comments.

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