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Poetry/Tetracty/I Keep
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1596-007-06
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 07, 2023
For the International Contest Tetractys
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 11/18/2023

First Place

Grief Quotes - VeeroesQuotes

"The loss is unmeasurable but so is the love left behind." Quote_ Unknown I keep my memories, in an old chest, there are pictures, albums and precious things. Sometimes, I open that old chest with tears so meaningful, and fading, dusty, aged. For I must not forget, that I grieve them, a family I loved with all my heart.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Constance :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2023 2:31:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, hugs and blessings

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2023 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Constance, a well written heartfelt poem.

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2023 4:38:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the congratulation and compliment, blessings

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 3:59:00 AM

Dear Constance, your poems are always soul touching and so sincerely moving, this truly hits deep for me as i read about grief and memories and how you keep them close to your heart. I especially loved the line “ there are pictures, albums and precious things. Sometimes, I open that old chest with tears“ so poignant and powerful how emotions can be conveyed through words. Love the quote too. Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your well deserved win

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2023 4:39:00 PM

Ink, thank you so much for the lovely comment, the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Eve Roper

Date: 11/10/2023 11:43:00 AM

Awe, so heartfelt write. Very well written. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings your way my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend

Constance La France
Date: 11/10/2023 5:44:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, blessings

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/7/2023 12:40:00 PM

Your "I Keep" is a sad yet wonderful write/picture with a great ending. There are no words for the quote. I always enjoy reading your writes. Wish I could hug you... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2023 1:27:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the comment and compliment and compassion, blessings

Jay Narain

Date: 11/7/2023 11:37:00 AM

nicely penned

Constance La France
Date: 11/9/2023 1:28:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, blessings