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I Just Want the World To Be In Peace

so i am only 10 but when i made my account i did not care what my age in my account 
now the poem 

                           i just want world to be in peace

the world is all about fighting shouting cursed words and lies but there are some people that changed there ways or were always the same good people 



and this is all just a test by god

and allot of us are failing in this 

but some people are still good

and those are going in heaven 

i hope we all go to heaven



i just hope that all people will go to the Muslim way 

and become the best 

but all of us will be trying to be the best

but we are the best inside our hearts 

and we could be the best there is if we just believe that we are the best 


 
i just hope that the world wold change to a better place 

were no bad words are said 

and every one is happy

and there going to be enough love for every body 
                                                   
                                  i hope you enjoyed my poem 

                                                   :]

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/30/2024 8:32:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2017 2:48:00 AM

- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem Hassan, hope there will be many more in the future - // S.S.

Hassan Karim
Date: 10/29/2017 4:28:00 AM

thanks