I Just Found Out - Contest

I just found out that i love you
Didnt realise it before
Been  around for a longtime
Used to think you quite a bore

Time has made a difference
To how my mind has grown
You were not my preference...
Now my senses you have blown

You've gone  from friend to lover
With happy moments in between
Grown to know each other
As a couple we are seen

Time is of the essence
Is what  is being said
Saying its about time
That we were getting wed

But that isn't on the cards
Friends we will always be
Cos im talking about poetrysoup
Together always you and me




April 24 2013
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Oyewole Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Congrats on your win~A.O
May Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:19 AM
congrats on a fine win Seren...hope you are feeling just as fine
Johnson Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations. You caught me off guard. Love, Joyce
Jones Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Seren ...:-)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 1:36 AM
Nice one Sass and glad to see you back xx
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 12:58 PM
Its different Mandy lol ...Seren
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:00 PM
yes, many of us feel like we are married to PS. As long as it does not become a ball and chain. haha. VERy unique take on this topic. Love the imagination of this.
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 7:07 PM
Lol but look at the family that comes with it Andrea ... Oh my ....Seren
Mittal Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 1:23 AM
its nice!
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Hello Sima we havent met before. thank you for stopping by ....Seren
Jones Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 7:25 PM
Very cute...Seren
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 12:27 AM
Lol Donna, hope it makes people smile ...Seren
Bauer Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 3:58 PM
a delightful surprise at the end - nice one!
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 12:26 AM
Haha Ilene, couldnt think of what to write about ...Seren
Sivey Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 3:22 PM
I guess you could be married to Poetry Soup, though that could be a little awkward, ha ha! You have written a terrific and tremendous write my friend! I am enthralled by the beauty of your awesome verse, you have done excellent by the rhyming and meter is incredible! I am rather impressed with this delightful piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 12:25 AM
Lol thought i would write it differently....Seren
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