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I Just Didn'T

I couldn't Take a hint I couldn't Find a clue You laid it Heavy, right On the line But I still Seemed to miss The moral Of the story I couldn't See where I was falling Even though You mapped it All out Before I went Down the road To where we'd Meet Disaster for The one lost Who's only Follwing Their feelings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/23/2010 10:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Charissa. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:36:00 PM
good write... enjoyed
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Book: Shattered Sighs