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I Just Can'T Win

My wife said our sex life, ”Is always the same…” “You need to spice things up, and rekindle our flame” So I got onto the net and researched lots of stuff I took tons of notes and soon…I had enough I went to “Trickie’s Tricks” with a list a mile long I even skipped around, humming a naughty little song So my wife came home from work and entered the scene I sported a mankini and mask…she started to scream I chased with a feather in one hand and whip in the other She dashed from the room, crying loudly for her mother She slipped on the rose petals…the candles fell to the floor I reached for massage lotion as she darted out the door She left me hot and bothered, much to my chagrin Whatever I do, I feel I just can’t win! So next time… I’ll ignore her rebuffs Tomorrow night, I’ll whip out the cuffs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/7/2012 10:26:00 PM
Natile, congratulations In Joe's contest. Nice to see this contest finally up ;-) Good night PD
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Date: 7/4/2012 12:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Natalie! LOL, just hilarious. I can always count on you for a laugh. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:10:00 PM
Haha! Love it. Congrats. :) Tanya
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "I Just Can't Win" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:35:00 AM
Nat, congrats on your win, 'Trickie's Tricks' ha ha ha...David
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Date: 7/2/2012 8:23:00 PM
Congrats, Natalie. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. hugs Ralph
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Date: 7/2/2012 5:41:00 PM
My goodness. She's probably still running. Congratulatioons on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2012 3:39:00 PM
OMG! dang I love this poem!
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:58:00 PM
Great poem...loved it...so fun..
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Date: 1/6/2012 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Romance" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2011 5:56:00 PM
This is super cool, Natalie. you have quite a clever quill for humorous writing. YOU GO GIRL. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/29/2011 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Natalie! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/29/2011 3:46:00 PM
Cute one..Congrats on your win with this humorous work..Sara
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Date: 12/29/2011 11:56:00 AM
Great job Natalie! Congratulations..Best regards, Jon
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Date: 12/29/2011 11:47:00 AM
hahahahaha! Oh, what fun this is, Natalie! You got me snickering here and imagining this so well! What a fun, funny write! Haha, loved it! Super congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 12/29/2011 11:35:00 AM
This one is hilarious Natalie, the poor guy!! I really enjoyed this :) thanks for the laughs and congratulations on your great win in David's contest ;)
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Date: 12/29/2011 5:18:00 AM
I think I am laughing even louder the 2nd time around!! This is a great romantic poem and one which all boring spouses should read! Congrats on taking the contest to the HILT! You ROCK, Natalie,,,,Congrats on making me laugh...I think this one will stay in my head for the entire day!! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/29/2011 4:36:00 AM
Love it, should have placed higher, Wicked humor girl x
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Date: 12/29/2011 3:03:00 AM
Natalie congrats on your 3rd place win, I like the way you put comedy in romance, You went for that wicked sense of humour we share, I hope this is not from personnal experience, thanks for entering..David
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:29:00 PM
Very entertaining and funny...I loved it! Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/27/2011 4:02:00 PM
not a jersey shore fan more like law and order svu or criminal intent.
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Date: 12/24/2011 11:05:00 AM
Ps. Smile ˜ I Am not a writer and yet many here are, my dear beautiful Natalie ˜ I appreciate your kind visit and hope that you have a very blessed and beautiful Christmas Eve & day ˜ My love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:51:00 AM
now i see why you like susan.
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Date: 12/24/2011 12:35:00 AM
Oh my this is hilarious!I loved the tale of this guy's sorry attempts at "spicing things up" ...best wishes for the contest...love,Deb
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Date: 12/23/2011 8:34:00 PM
Very funny, Natalie. I can picture the scene in my mind and it's hilarious. Kim
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