I Jumped

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I was just a kid Lost in a world of grownups I was often with a sad eye I never admitted the cry The street was not a happy place Seekers of the dark With adult leers I was so so filled with abject fear Twm mocked, even though de-frocked Chasing the pains and nightmares Glamorgan was full of bridges Under which the trolls held vigils For Twm chased many to death As I ran and I ran, as fast As my little feet can I reached the bridge On top I stand A child’s fear drowned I jumped

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/9/2017 6:49:00 PM

I don't know what to say.... I can just say, good for you... at least you had the courage. I didn't!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2017 8:56:00 AM

I can relate.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/1/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thanks Richard!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2017 5:04:00 AM

- Terrible thought from a child, so sad Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/1/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine of Norway!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/19/2017 10:27:00 PM

Bully's if convicted of causing a child to harm themself should be required to register as a offender just the same as a pedophile. There needs more to be done as I even see in adults that putting down another human being just a joke.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/1/2017 11:16:00 AM

Thanks Tim, I see yo got the exact message behind this one, thank you!