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I Journeyed On

I walked along a well traveled dirt road, intrigued by an old mill that caught my eye, where flowing water of a river slowed. My interest peaked as I stood nearby. Intrigued by an old mill that caught my eye, I sauntered nearer for a better look. My interest peaked as I stood nearby, captured as quickly as Queen takes a rook. I sauntered nearer for a better look, mesmerized by the cadence of the wheel, captured as quickly as Queen takes a rook, as it played a song in rhythmical peal. Mesmerized by the cadence of the wheel, my mind drifted 'neath grey skies for a while as it played a song in rhythmical peal. Journeying on, I wore an amused smile. My mind drifted 'neath grey skies for a while, where flowing water of a river slowed. Journeying on, I wore an amused smile. I walked along a well traveled dirt road. N/A'd in Pen a Pantoum Contest judged on 12.29.20

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Date: 1/16/2021 12:18:00 PM
Not usually a fan of a Pantoum but this one is exceptional, congrats Jenna on your win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/17/2021 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, but since I'm a fairly new member, I didnt have many poems from which to choose that fit your contest requirements.
Date: 12/7/2020 7:51:00 AM
Well done! I tried one of these but I just didn't have the mustard.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/1/2021 4:38:00 AM
It's not as difficult as you make it seem, Mark. It might work better with Mayo.

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