Tavip Endro Yuwono Poet Free verse

I Imagine

I imagine a universe without god
What a powerful man !
I imagine a world without man
What a lovely place !
I imagine a country without politicians
What a peaceful land !
I imagine daily trade without businessmen
What a simple life !
I imagine a way of life without machines
What a romantic life !
I imagine a day without women
What a quiet day of rest !
But when I imagine my own self without you
Who I am then …

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Diane Christian March 22, 2009 at 11:12 AM what a lovley poem, I imaging the day Jesus returns then all the things you write will be true,a world of peace and harmony and pure bliss, Paradise, and one of my fave worship songs is called I can only imagine, when Jesus comes back WOW what a beautiful place it will be, I love the last two line because i would be nothing with out God. God Bless you from diane

Sue Mason March 18, 2009 at 10:38 AM Interesting write here, Tavip and I too often think I was born into the wrong generation and would have liked to have lived when the world was simpler ... like maybe with the hunter/gatherers ... LOL ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I look forward to much more writing from you!!

James Faulkner March 17, 2009 at 9:22 PM this peace had made me lol from the opening laugh. really cool piece. (probably didnt get alot of comments and its credit for the first line. lol alot of fundamentalist here at the soup but all is well. great write) lol THE IMAGINATION MUST NOT BE TAMED